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Looking for help - Alexander Trafford - 03-04-2006
Alright so I'm getting the feeling that I'm no longer improving in my writing abilities and the style of writing I use is getting old and uninteresting to read now, so I'm looking for some help. Here are some examples of stuff I've written.
BAS rd. 1- Not alot here, but more to come.
RS, i come in from here on.
Retribution in Crimson
Master of Assassins
Also searching 'takeover saga' or 'courage that dwells' on Earth will have stuff from me inside. I would be pleased if you could read any little bit of this and give me advice, whether its grammer, style, content, quanity, quality. Also as a writer on this site do you think I'm overhyped? underhyped? on par. This will help me to let me know where i am and which direction i should go. Thank you for your time.