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joinning as dark blade
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Name:dark blade

Age:14

RaceConfusedayain

Sex:male

Starting Planet:vegeta

Profession: (default is “Unemployed”)

Fighting Style: aggresive

Short BioBig Grinark blade was a dark shadow lurking in the halls.He was evil and hates people who try to save other people.He carries a sword he made from unbreakable metal.He will destroy an opponent at any cost.

General Description:Black hair,black cape and black armor,black tights,black boots.

Starting Abilities: Slasher:a numberous of slashes from his shadow sword
Burning sword:The sword light on fire and is more powerful.

Trait:lone wolf

Stats: (all must be a combined total of 100%, with the exception of choosing Inner Strengh as an Ability, which gives you an extra 15%)

Strength -25%
Focus - 25%
Endurance - 25%
Agility - 25%

Role-play Sample: (minimum 300 words)
Dark blade was lurking in the shadow of an dark ally.He see's a guy protecting someone.Dark Blade runs up too him and slashes him with his blade.He runs to his house and goes into the bed.When he wakes up he puts his blade on,and runs into the streets.Dark Blade meets up with some freinds to bully some hero's.They see someone saving a woman from a burglar.Dark blade does his burning sword.The flames on the sword get bigger and bigger by the second.Dark blade Slashes the hero as hard as he can and splits the hero in half.He says:Burning sword OUT!The swords flames come off the blade.Dark blade and his freinds leave the area before the cops arrive.He puts his sword in his sword holder on his back.One of the freinds say lets rob a bank and dark blade says alright.When they arrive at the bank dark blade holds the sword to the cashiers throat and says:GIMME THE MONEY!The cashier gets the bags of money and hand them off to the thugs.The freinds and dark blade leave the area.Dark blade says:haha nice!look at all this money!Dark blade goes home and watches the news on his old dusty T.V.Dark blade had forgotten about the witnesses.The news lady gives out the description of dark blade and he starts to get nervous.Dark blade heads out his house angry of how stupid he is.Dark blade stops running in the middle of the street and says:AHAHHAHA!dark blades ki starts to charge up and buildings start to fall down.Dark blade Goes into the air and starts blasting buildings and innocent people one by one.An hour later dark blade falls from the sky into the ground.Theres nothing around him but building dust.One of his freinds pick him up and take himt o his house.

total words:333
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#2
I'm sorry but you do not meet the requirements to become a member on this site. Your writing sample needs to improve greatly.

Please read this thread:

http://cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=25093

As well as:

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=17671

You may try again once you have practiced and improved.
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