[Quest] The Tourist

[Prototype]

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=28960

All done. Could I get someone (Vad) to grade for me please?

[Sigfried Hunin]

If youre gonna do it as a quest and not a job, its community grading, yeah?

Well, I really enoyed it. Ive been keeping up ever since you started the quest and Im happy to see you finish it. You had solid writing and a good voice throughout the quest and I liked that you really intigrated it into your character's progression instead of just doing it on the side.

The only thing that really stuck out to me plot wise was just the bit where he tackled the guy instead of shooting him and he was praised for his qick thinking. I mean, not a huge deal by any means but in my simple lil mind it would have been quicker thinking to have shot him when the engagement started or when he went into a monologue. Thats just me though.

You had a few clerical errors where youslipped a word in on accident or something, nothing that would affect my grading.

Id say 700 zenni and 15 exp.

[Vad]

I apologize for the delay. I was away the week you posted this and I had forgotten about it. I'll get it done tonight.

[Vad]

300z and 5 XP.