Anguish (Needs editing)

[Anguish]

Name: Anguish

Age: 24

Race: generic*(Dragoon)

Sex: Male

Starting Planet: Earth

Profession: Unemployed

Fighting Style: Agressive

Short Bio: bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored.

General Description: (your character’s physical features)

Starting Abilities: Bukujutsu, Inner Strength

Trait: Efficient.

Stats:

Strength - 30%
Focus - 25%
Endurance - 30%
Agility - 30%

Role-play Sample:
bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, , bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored.

(I know... i got mad skillz )

[Ashe]

I'd definitely agree that it needs editing.