Comments and Criticism- MOA (Fight!)

[Alexander Trafford]

Can I get some C&C on the Fight against Gohan in MOA, I'm sure he would love some C&C as well on his post. Anything on either his one post, or mine would be much appreciated. We will both have another post up by friday as well.

MOA- Fight (Last 2 Posts)

Thank you.

[Toshiro]

Few things...

One, I hate you.

Two, I hate you...

Three, I bloody hate you! >.<


That was some grade A post.. How the hell am I meant to compaire ='(