12-02-2009, 09:02 AM
This is not something anyone has to do. I am just wondering if someone could read my stuff over and give me some pointers. Maybe some clues as to what I can do to improve. Heck maybe a few key words or thoughts on my character. I know I am not the greatest writer nor am I the greatest idea maker right now but I am trying to come up with something interesting for my character so anything you can do to help me improve would be greatfully accepted.
Linkage to rp area: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post523802
Linkage to rp area: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post523802