Feedback Request

[Ashe]

Ok, this is going out to anyone other than Burter. I will not be able to do "response" feedback on your posts either, as I won't have time, but I can at least make a request. If anyone is able, would anyone be willing to read through my Friend or Foe 2 posts and give me some good feedback on them so I can know what I need to work on? That'd be appreciated.

[Burter Jr]

Originally posted by Kirano
Sure if I have the time.

You have to actually be able to write decent before you can judge someone else. Unfortunetly, that rules you out

[Burter Jr]

Originally posted by Kirano
Huh I do. Ur just teasing me.

No. I'm not kidding.

[Burter Jr]

Originally posted by Kirano

Originally posted by Burter Jr

Originally posted by Kirano
Huh I do. Ur just teasing me.

No. I'm not kidding.

I hate you. Ur also ugly.

I'm flattered, considering you don't actually know what I look like.

[Old Dave]

next one of you to post insulting the other get's warned. This is not the place.

[Burter Jr]

Sorry, my bad.

[Hellfighter 17]

Originally posted by Uub
next one of you to post insulting the other get's warned. This is not the place.

I warned Kirano not to spam or anything of teh sort in here before, so he has a warning for this.

[Ashe]

*thread locked*

I'm going to try again, in a clean thread...

Uub, thank you. Very much.