Custom Technique Approval

[Mal Nova]

Untouchable isn't god like lol. It's a Dark Ki form of an energy barrier, so to speak.

[Kaden]

Untouchable isn't god like lol. It's a Dark Ki form of an energy barrier, so to speak.

That's not what the description says.

[Kaden]

Vad: What was the thought process on the cost of Tempest?

Silent Shot - Forming his first two fingers and thumb into the shape of a gun, Orion can emit an invisible bolt of ki roughly the same strength of a kamehameha and just as draining. The strength of this ability lies in its covert nature; the actual energy is imperceivable to the naked eye (while still detectable by ki sense or a scouter) and moves at phenomenal speeds, allowing Orion to launch a powerful attack without drawing attention and at a moment's notice. The downside is that it cannot be sustained; each bullet requires the same amount of ki as a kamehameha, and Orion rarely fires more than one bullet unless in dire circumstances.

Something like that would require Stealth. Something like a kiai would be ok without Stealth, but a full-out attack would require the Ability.

Offline - Using Orion's intimate knowledge of ki, he can weave an expanding barrier from himself that scrambles any scouters or utilisation of ki sense for a short period, which becomes less effective the further away the senser is. It is used for escape attempts or to disorient the opponent. Visually, it appears a sudden and short lived flash of light from his body.

Definitely can't allow it.

[Vad]

Vad: What was the thought process on the cost of Tempest?

That it was a potent AOE technique that would damage everything around you as long as you kept the technique going. Though, looking back at it, I think I priced it too high.

[Kaden]

Ok.

If you feel like you should lower it, go for it. I'm not going to push one way or the other.

[Vad]

Ok.

If you feel like you should lower it, go for it. I'm not going to push one way or the other.

Revised to 30.

[Kaden]

Groovy.

[Zader]

Rush: you charge at your foe putting all your energy into one punch that deals fare damage to your enemy wastes alot of your energy and a little stamina afterward and is a last resort attack

[Mal Nova]

Untouchable- As the user taps into his unconventional ki, his eyes and body glow with his dark energy. As this happens he is able to repel and deflect all normal ki blasts and can deflect or reduce that of even more powerful attacks aimed at him.


Dark Break- As the Users knuckles or energy burns dark they can shatter through regular ki shields with ease.

Rogue Flare- The user concentrates, taking in the Dark Matter or energy of the shadows and unleashes a heavy bast of Dark Energy at the foe(Best used when in cohorts of darkness or evil)

Well first off I suggested these three techniques to him to check out to test the waters and see what was what...

I can reword it for him if you'd like and I can make Dark Break a bit more detailed if you'd like as well.

I'm sorry I visualize the attack, with all types od situations and think of a single description... to help... and make it seem like it could be god modded... I'd think that if such a thing happened... Staff would styep in anyway... But I will rewrite them for him...

[Kazuya]

Shockwave - Kazuya supercharges the ground beneath her with ki, sending out waves of small 'earthquakes' in a circular radius. These shockwaves have a chance of shooting up raw ki to anyone who is standing within the radius, and has a small chance of interrupting spellcasting (Other ki attacks), burns, and/or making it difficult for those on the ground to attack her with straight melee attacks (this does not mean it will be impossible to attack her, just you know, shit shooting up from the ground like landmines would make it a little difficult to advance when you're trying to dodge them)

EDIT: This lasts for about 10 seconds before she needs to recharge. Usually a 10-30min cooldown.

[Mal Nova]

Untouchable- As the user taps into his unconventional ki, his eyes and body glow with his dark energy. As this happens he is able to repel and deflect all normal ki blasts . The energy or aura of the user counter acts with the conventional ki and dissapates it. Stronger attacks MAY be deflected or weakened but the attributes and power of attacks and energy exspelled to protect the user come into play


Dark Break - By using the dark nature of his energy, Vertias can empower his knuckles with a negative version of regular chi. This gives him an edge when dealing with Ki Shields and the like, but is not guaranteed to succeed. The opponents energy may still resist the attack. or even soften it.

[Kaden]

Well first off I suggested these three techniques to him to check out to test the waters and see what was what...

It was pretty obvious. You get pretty argumentative about anything you've had a hand in.

I'm sorry I visualize the attack, with all types od situations and think of a single description... to help... and make it seem like it could be god modded... I'd think that if such a thing happened... Staff would styep in anyway... But I will rewrite them for him...

What you visualize isn't really relevant. A move is graded on and expected to function like the description. We don't have time to go through every RP and check the use of every Custom Move. That's why it is important that the description is accurate.

[Josh]

I think you are misunderstanding something about Dark Ki Mal, it's not like negative ki or anything of that nature. It functions exactly like regular ki, the only difference is that there is no way to detect it.

[Vad]

I think you are misunderstanding something about Dark Ki Mal, it's not like negative ki or anything of that nature. It functions exactly like regular ki, the only difference is that there is no way to detect it.

That's my fault. I cleaned up the description for him to resubmit, because it was worded horridly. I couldn't think of a word and negative worked >.>

I did however tell him that there was no difference, besides the detection.

[Vad]

shockwave - kazuya supercharges the ground beneath her with ki, sending out waves of small 'earthquakes' in a circular radius. These shockwaves have a chance of shooting up raw ki to anyone who is standing within the radius, and has a small chance of interrupting spellcasting (other ki attacks), burns, and/or making it difficult for those on the ground to attack her with straight melee attacks (this does not mean it will be impossible to attack her, just you know, shit shooting up from the ground like landmines would make it a little difficult to advance when you're trying to dodge them)

edit: This lasts for about 10 seconds before she needs to recharge. Usually a 10-30min cooldown.

25 xp

[Kazuya]

Awesome. Lookie here, I just so happen to have 25 XP. Can I get this added to my roster?

[Orion]

Energy Rings - Orion emits halo shaped energy from his hand. When it hits the target, it snaps close around it and holds it in place, even in mid air. He normally uses this on an enemy's wrist or ankle to either stop them from running or to prevent them from moving. The binds can hold for about five seconds or they break once the captive has been struck, whichever comes first.

[Juno]

Bumping my reworked Yield, along with making a consolidated description:

Yield— Using this technique, Juno is able to make direct contact with an ally that has learned to control their inner energy and create a bond with them through ki. Though this will not allow them to speak through their minds as in telepathy, the caster is able to transfer visions from his Foresight ability to his partner. Effectively, this is a passive form of Possession that lasts for thirty minutes, and leaves the caster and partner exhausted. This tech requires the use of 1 PP due to its potential power. (Possession/Foresight/Ki Control)

[Juno]

...uh, bump again, even though I'm deeply afraid you're discussing it heavily and just forgot to tell me. I don't want to seem impatient, lol. If it's under discussion, lemme know.

[Kaden]

Ugh, sorry for the delay, Juno.

Going to have to deny Yield for now. That might be revised later, but we'll let you know if it is.