05-13-2008, 06:17 AM
Zangya: Your moves are fine. For "Solitude," clarify in the description that 'shock' has nothing to do with electricity, or use a different word, like 'stun' or 'astonish.' Also, remove the movie plug for "Indiana Zangya" or change it to 'inspired by Indiana Jones' or something.
Orion: Focus Beam needs some kind of weakness, or clarify if you mean it as a defensive move.
Orion: Focus Beam needs some kind of weakness, or clarify if you mean it as a defensive move.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_

