10-04-2009, 08:00 PM
Your title is: “The Metapolis”
In a neo-noir medieval Europe, a young author self-insert stumbles across an alien artifact which spurs him into conflict with his own insecurity vis-à-vis girls, with the help of a girl who's always loved him and her facility with magic, culminating in convoluted nonsense that squanders the readers’ goodwill.
In a neo-noir medieval Europe, a young author self-insert stumbles across an alien artifact which spurs him into conflict with his own insecurity vis-à-vis girls, with the help of a girl who's always loved him and her facility with magic, culminating in convoluted nonsense that squanders the readers’ goodwill.

