11-22-2005, 05:22 AM
I wouldn't have considered your post to be cliche, but I would consider it expected, based on what your character has dealt with. There's a massive difference. Cliche would be going to "What do you fear most?" route and having it be like your best friend hating you or girl/boy friend turning on you, things like that. I haven't read any posts though, and I'm sure people write that well if they did that.

