I need advice

[Ruhiel]

Eh, its a good move in theory, but you're trying to throw too many things into one move. It leaves too many "what if" situations. If certain conditions constantly have to be met in order for the technique to work, then you're shooting yourself in the foot, rping-wise. Just remember: simple is better. I used to have an ultra-mega-supa complicated move (Stellar Cataclysm) but when I used it in a rp, I realized I HATED trying to describe everything that was going on. It didn't make sense for all that to be able to happen.

Also, the wording makes it a bit too vague. Whenever I'm thinking up a move, I ask myself "what would someone rping with or against me be able to do with this?" If it seems like it'd be hard for them to write with, tweak it until you think it's manageable.

Nevertheless, the move is good, if it were multiple moves broken apart, and then made a combo like this. Combos rely on conditions being met, best moves shouldn't. You could make a move such as "Shadow Field" that gives him that field of shadows around himself. Could be VERY fun to rp with when its nighttime. Offers a lot of opportunities. Then you can move onto a cloning move, and then only a clone "trap" like you were thinking.

Or, ignore me and go with your move. It's your choice anyways