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[Hellfighter 17]

Despite a couple of minor grammatical errors, I thought it was good. Normally I dislike question marks in the non-speech, but you mix it in there very nicely, and it helps the reader see into what is going on in Eighteen's thoughts, even if it isn't her exact thought. While reading, I didn't even imagine the Eighteen from DBZ, I saw an anime girl similar to the one in your sig, and when I realized this I noticed how much she is yours. I like to read your roleplays, which is evident to me because as soon as I saw it I just went and read it, where I basically don't read much on here unless I hafta.

Bravo.