05-08-2007, 08:47 PM
@Celipa:
You were Puar, right? Here's some advice: Stand out
You had great roleplays and I LOVED roleplaying Puar in the fights but you were invisible compared to your comrades. This is the biggest problem with being in a group: Some people are just 'there.' That was you last year. You need to be a group where I can point and say "Oh, that's the alliance with Celipa in it"
Your writing didn't lack, you just got outshined by the frontrunners of the alliance. I think if you take the advice I just gave you, you'll hit Top 30 at the least, and from there isn't anybody's guess
You were Puar, right? Here's some advice: Stand out
You had great roleplays and I LOVED roleplaying Puar in the fights but you were invisible compared to your comrades. This is the biggest problem with being in a group: Some people are just 'there.' That was you last year. You need to be a group where I can point and say "Oh, that's the alliance with Celipa in it"
Your writing didn't lack, you just got outshined by the frontrunners of the alliance. I think if you take the advice I just gave you, you'll hit Top 30 at the least, and from there isn't anybody's guess
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