09-17-2006, 04:50 AM
Quote:http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post270486
If anyone would like to C&C that.
I thought it was good, personaly i didn't see any flaws, then again I'm no expert but i liked it. I know what you meant about the detail, there was alot of it in your writing.
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