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I'm in shock, to be honest. I'll have to read it. I don't know if its enough to save you though. You were low and really needed to get more roleplays out. You've got to build the character more, or else the times you DO win, people will wonder why you are in over someone else that would craft story. I like the character and would like to learn more about it
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Yeah i have been working on some character development angles that will be deployed post DA or possibly even in the game if i survive this fight which doesnt seem likely.
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I've come to discover something I greatly miss about not playing Raditzu anymore: combat dialog. It was just so easy for him to rip off a few one liners. That definitely doesn't work with Kaden.
Oh well, post up. Good luck, Vince.
"It's on my brain, driving me insane. It's on my mind, all of
the time, and if it left... I would be fine."
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Writing now. Hopefully, I can keep a clear enough head to finish this before the deadline.
Sage Wrote:Holy shit. The knives and everything.
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Gonna be writing in a moment, finishing eating my dinner.
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WALL OF TEXT
(please don't hate)
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OMG! I LOVED THE Post Ashe lol... it was like out of a horror film!
Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've become a really great writer
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Congrats Sophia and good luck to all the remaining participants. Cya on the other side mofos.
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Were me and Trafford left alone on purpose and I missed that announcement?
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Fighting to the bitter end is an advantage when your opponent does not wish to perish.
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No, you weren't left alone on purpose. Shou was eliminated by collar, and you two fought by default, since you were the only ones in the sector.
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Oh. I meant for an update last night, but you explained in the chatbox. I was curious. No rush mang. Take all the time you need.
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Fighting to the bitter end is an advantage when your opponent does not wish to perish.
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Mal Nova Wrote:OMG! I LOVED THE Post Ashe lol... it was like out of a horror film!
I was trying to have you take advantage of all your moves, so figured you might like that.