FoFII: Discussion

[Burter Jr]

I still plan on one

[Ashe]

I'm glad that you liked it, Burter. I was honestly worried that you would deem it out of character for her. I wanted to show something about how this event had changed Reijin a bit, and to let you guys see a side of Reijin that noone has seen before. I'm very happy with the result.

Although I'm shocked and happy to have made it this far.

I wish to devote a solemn congragulations to the three members of my in-game team that I had been working with up until their untimely death: Uub, Kami, and Olibu. Part of me is glad that this new round is a single person event of a sorts, as I would be at a loss for teammates suddenly, aside from Vejita. Thank you very much for inspiring me guys.

I now have some deep thought to do as far as the hidden demons inside of my character goes... I have a good idea though. But I have to see what Burter means by "leave it open to take over". I'm assuming you mean "if its a clown, don't blow its head off" type deal?

Good luck guys!

[Burter Jr]

Leave it open means leave the ending at a point where I can take over and write the ending myself

EDIT:

And since a couple people are having trouble with inspiriation, just remember this. Your biggest fear doesn't have to be a physical battle. For example, BJ's biggest fear would be Burter not caring about him. I could do the whole thing without one punch thrown

Not to say battles are bad, cause they arn't 8)

[Zarbon]

Hmmm...This is tough. I already did my fears in the Shadow Mountains. O_o Bad timing?

[Piper Juunanagou]

Originally posted by Zarbon
Hmmm...This is tough. I already did my fears in the Shadow Mountains. O_o Bad timing?

You could always build upon his fears once again, or maybe reveal new things that Zarbon fears. I don't know, just thought I would offer some advice. I'm lucky I guess... Seventeen, well at heart he's just a woman and fears way too many things...all of which I will probably touch upon in my post.

[Zarbon]

Ya, alright. I guess I'll get to work then.

[Zarbon]

Question: Is there any reason we are fighting our worst fears?

[Burter Jr]

It'll all be explained in time, I promise.

[Zarbon]

Alright then, is it ok if I personify Fear?

[Burter Jr]

You mean like actually have Fear be a person?

I don't see why not. That'd scare me just a tad.

[Zarbon]

Well, I'm just thinking there might be some problems with the post I'm trying to conduct. Here, I'll PM you what I'm trying to do with this, and why it might be a problem...

[Piper Juunanagou]

Sorry if this is a stupid question, but what do you consider evening to be Burter Junior? Would that be around 6 or 7? I'm just wondering when the deadline is so I can know if I will have time after school to work on my post or not.

[Burter Jr]

Yea, no earlier then 6 PM EST

[Hellfighter 17]

That was absolutely magnificent, Cell; I read it just like yea sked me to, and I'm glad I did. The transition between the first area and the second wasn't as desirable as the rest, but I'd say you still did a pretty good job. I love how you portray the different Cells; most people have it that they are just schizophrenic and it comes off that way, but you have each one be their own entity, which I'd say is probably a hard job; better than I've seen practically anybody on here do--that I've read, of course. *thumbs up* I knew you were a great writer since you first joined, and you are one of my favourites.

[Zarbon]

Awesome, Cell.

[Ander]

While I congratulate you for being bold enough to post first, I must say, that you have ripped the rug out from under me, sir. =(

[Zarbon]

I'm about to bring mine up. I hope its good enough to contend with you guys. :/

[Piper Juunanagou]

There's my post, I spent a bit of time on it, so I hope it's good enough to stand up to everyone elses... Just for clarity, Seventeen fears succumbing to his inner demons and in the process, losing everything he holds dear (sanity, friends) more then anything else.

[Zarbon]

Agreed. Everyone has done an awesome job so far.

[Ander]

Not all that original, but I gave it a shot.

*crosses fingers*