Oppinions?

[Android-18]

http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post201266

I'm hoping space will motivate me. If anyone has any imput that'd be cool. It's just the start, but I'll hopefully make this a very thrilling personal saga.

[Hellfighter 17]

Despite a couple of minor grammatical errors, I thought it was good. Normally I dislike question marks in the non-speech, but you mix it in there very nicely, and it helps the reader see into what is going on in Eighteen's thoughts, even if it isn't her exact thought. While reading, I didn't even imagine the Eighteen from DBZ, I saw an anime girl similar to the one in your sig, and when I realized this I noticed how much she is yours. I like to read your roleplays, which is evident to me because as soon as I saw it I just went and read it, where I basically don't read much on here unless I hafta.

Bravo.

[Android-18]

O.o

I didn't describe the ship for a reason, I'm gonna look for a picture.

I have no idea what you meant by

I'm not quite sure what if there was a point to what came after that mood shift, or rather to point was to have your thoughts drift rapidly from one thing to the next. OR waste time? Or maybe it all just flew over my head. It just seemed like you were covering a dozen tiny different things and my mind went yada yada yada. Although now I want to read this fusioned battle.

You're posts are incrediably confusing. If you meant the italicized text, that is a memory.

[Android-18]

*Double post*



I was thinking of making my ship look like this, I thought I'd put it here.

[Banned Dana]

Personally, i love it 18. The ship is hardcore looking.

[Android-18]

It's a romulan warbird, just so you guys know xD. I found a slew of ships on a star trek site.