Vvzlaraiden's Reign [Saga Idea]

[Alsa]

Kk, so I remember when i suggested an awesome saga like 6 months ago, so I want to rebring the idea.

PLOT

Where: Strange Asteroid

Who can participate: Everyone (if dead, you will be teleported to the asteroid)



STORY-LINE


The toughest fighters in the universe have been teleported to Xravinor III, a huge asteroid with many arena's and key fighting spots. The person behind the plot, Vvzlaraiden, has brought everyone to Xravinor III in order to hold a tournament. The winners move up in the tournament are moved higher up, while the loser's power is completely absorbed by Vvzlaraiden and the loser is thrown into the the deep, deep mines of Xravinor III. The mines are filled with extremely deadly monsters, humanoids, traps, and, of course, other participants. The arena matches are held in different arena's on Xravinor III. Xravinor III is approximately three times the size of earth and serves as Vvzlaraiden's base, as well as a base for over Four-Thousand arena's and domes and mines that are filled with deadly creatures were Vvzlaraiden mines Xadar, a rare and expencive crystal that he used to buy his army. All through Xravinor III are Vvzlaraiden's troops, who keep the tournament in order and guard the mines, preventing escape (almost).


The final match will be the winner (with all his energy) and everyone who managed to escape the mine, versus Vvzlaraiden, who has 10,000 base max ki PLUS everyone who was defeated's ki and his top two advisors. (With a max ki of 30,000,000).
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(**MORE SOON**)

[Alsa]

((--=BUMPSU=--))

[Ander]

Kirano, it's only been a day. Don't bump.

[Alsa]

I made it without thinking of fof.

[Ashe]

Did you purposely choose the most godawful names?

Reminds me of a Magic card that was made by WotC as a joke about that very thing...

Zzzyxa's Abyss or something. Was going to show a picture.. and then just didn't care.

[Jonathan Meer]

Yeah. Either a Magic goofy card, or a Yugioh serious card. Either way, those names are pretty annoying.

[Jonathan Meer]

Originally posted by Shu
If you don't like the names, suggest new ones. Saying the names are bad isn't going to change anything.

Why not? We don't like the names. What's the harm in saying we don't like them?

[Hellfighter 17]

It's called criticism. When somebody does a bad roleplay do you rewrite the whole thing for them just 'cause they post it in here?

[Hellfighter 17]

Names can make or break something. Either way, let's not debate it.

[Alsa]

BUUUUUUUUUUUUMP

BTW, I just randomly entered keys that sounded cool -_-

Make up names if you want.

[Jonathan Meer]

Let's call the really strong guy "Chris".

[Hellfighter 17]

Originally posted by Krillin
Let's call the really strong guy "Chris".

I know you could easily come up with how that was not spamming, but I think you know in heart that it was. I know Bardock is the moderator of this forum, but I haven't seen him on in a little bit and I feel the need to tell you that you need to watch da spamming in non-spam areas.

I know, I know--funny coming from me.

[Jonathan Meer]

I was being serious. =/

Bah. Fine.

Potential names that don't suck: Riddick. Just use Riddick.

[Alsa]

WHATEVER! Do you like the saga or not?

[Alsa]

Originally posted by Dr. Raichi

Originally posted by Kirano
WHATEVER! Do you like the saga or not?

I sorta like it. But it sounds alot like a takeover saga. I think we should stop doing tournaments and shiz, and do someone whacky and non power related.

=[

Then, <whatshisgayhomoname> teleports everyone to the <gayhomonamedasteroid> and makes 4 teams. These teams fight each other to see a winner. The people who die's energy goes to <whatshisgayhomoname>. Then, at the end, everyone will fight <whatshisgayhomoname>. Sound good now?

[Alsa]

Originally posted by Dr. Raichi

Originally posted by Kirano

Originally posted by Dr. Raichi

Originally posted by Kirano
WHATEVER! Do you like the saga or not?

I sorta like it. But it sounds alot like a takeover saga. I think we should stop doing tournaments and shiz, and do someone whacky and non power related.

=[

Then, <whatshisgayhomoname> teleports everyone to the <gayhomonamedasteroid> and makes 4 teams. These teams fight each other to see a winner. The people who die's energy goes to <whatshisgayhomoname>. Then, at the end, everyone will fight <whatshisgayhomoname>. Sound good now?

Nope still involves power level.

<whatshisgayhomoname> has a power level that is 3x as much as rad, so everyone will need to RP to take him down. SOUND GOOD NOW!?

[Super Buu]

You're being completely uncreative, to be blunt. Sagas aren't just about big fights and then the rewards (or at least, they shouldn't be). They're about throwing you into a scenario which you couldn't roleplay otherwise. Good examples are sagas which force you to team you up with people you've never RPed with before, things like that.

But those are just the foundations. You need to build an interesting, engaging story which gives people a lot of roleplaying fodder. 'Some guy is really strong like 500x stronger than Raditzu NO 1000 TIMES' just doesn't cut it for me.

[Alsa]

Lemme try again.


Everyone is teleported inside a huge mine in different area's with another person. Each person has on their wrists, a brace that makes them stay within 300 feet of each other. They must make it through the deadly mine and escape the horror's within that include gas traps, powerful enemies, and, of course, OTHER PC's. When you get out of the mine ( approx 1- 4 months), there will be three teleporters that are randomly honed to different places. One teleports you back to the mine were you started, one teleports you to back to were you were before teleported, with 100 Zeni (IE, I'd be teleported to hell), and one teleports you to a dome with random enviroments with a random opponet that is both of your powerlevel's added up. And remember, you still have the brace on. When you win, you'll be teleported back to the three teleporters.

[Alsa]

EDITED OUT! CLICKED QUOTE INSTEAD OF EDIT

[The Terminator]

Yeah, something that doesn't involve some huge dude with an unimaginable powerlevel would be good. Also, a fight in space doesn't seem original to me. Maybe in another dimension or something.