12-01-2006, 10:13 PM
Mr. Cell Junior's Company
Yeah, I think it's obvious that I'm not an amazing writer, but I'm trying to get better. However I was wondering if anyone can C&C my current DA:C works and point out the flaws in my writing so I can try to improve my RPs.
Yeah, I think it's obvious that I'm not an amazing writer, but I'm trying to get better. However I was wondering if anyone can C&C my current DA:C works and point out the flaws in my writing so I can try to improve my RPs.
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