[C&C] Tamsin

[Tamsin]

Tamsin's Storyline

• Oh well, why not? [Joining Application] - An introduction post. After the death of her stepmother, Tamsin leaves the safe confines of the Servus guild and faces the unknown outside world.
  
  
  
• Meeting of the Minds - With an economic crisis on Earth, Tamsin leaves for Mercy in order to find work. There, she encounters Maleficus Nova, a mercenary with a similar goal. In spite of their completely different professions, they still end up working together as they are tasked with removing a local crime lord...one way or another.
  
  
  
• Dante`s Abyss 2009 [Saga] - Although her first job leaves Tamsin somewhat traumatised, it also brings her and Maleficus Nova closer together and confirms her position as his personal servant. The two receive invitations to Dante`s Abyss. Maleficus gladly accepts in an attempt to surpass his father, while Tamsin joins the bloodsport out of her newborn loyalty towards the Namekian.
  - [00] Welcome!
  - [01] City Sector
  - [01] Forest Sector
  - [01] Forest Sector FIGHT
  - [02] City Sector
  - [02] City Sector FIGHT
  - [03] Mountain Sector
  - [03] Arctic Sector FIGHT
  - [04] Arctic Sector
  - [04] City Sector
  - [04] City Sector FIGHT
  - [05] Mountain Sector
  - [05] Mountain Sector FIGHT
  
  
  
• Rebirth of the Horsemen - Having failed to win Dante's Abyss in her master's place, Tamsin meets up with Maleficus on Earth. There, however, they are approached by Enroshia Myroto, the companion of Maleficus's father Retane. The elf enlists the aid of the two in helping resolve the conflict that beset his homeland, a different plane of existance called Land Before Time.
  
  
  
• Kill Town [Saga] - Ongoing

Although I have not written much, I think I have enough material by now that it warrants some feedback. That is why I decided to copy my fellow writers and request for any comments and criticism you might have. I am not requesting for criticism of any specific piece, just of my writing in general and the character of Tamsin. I am aware that I still have a long road to go in order to improve my writing as well as flesh out Tamsin as a character. So I am going to need all the help I can get if I am to get through this process.

I am happy with how Tamsin has progressed so far. Although she has only existed for a very short period, I already feel like she is much more characterised then Jackie Chun ever was. I suppose a reason for that could be the fact that there was always this invisible barrier with how you potrayed cannon characters, whereas custom characters are entirely the fruit of your labour. That said, however, I am aware that Tamsin still very much feels like a rough draft and that I could still go ways with her. Specifically, as Ander mentioned to me, Tamsin needs to be less of a "Servus maid" girl and more of a well-rounded individual. That is what I am hoping to achieve in future roleplays, although whether it will turn out that way remains to be seen.

One more thing. As far as I am concerned, you can preety much ignore my non-fight DA posts after Day 2 when giving feedback. Those were nothing more then filler 300-word RP's written in order to not die due to collar detonations and I feel deep shame for writing them. The only reason they are linked here is for the sake of completeness. I will probably remove the DA sub-links fully once the list of my RP's becomes too extensive.

Also, I thank Sage for making this awesome storyline order scheme and I hope he does not mind if I use it as well.

[Tamsin]

Updated. Rebirth of the Horsemen is finished, although the quest did not end up well due to continuous delays on my part and beacuse we were in a bit of a hurry towards the end. Now participating in the Kill Town saga.