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Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Reijin - 10-17-2004
Reijin settled quietly down onto the ground. "Well well... Time for this wish, isn't it." He chuckled. Reijin turned to Koola and Raditzu. "So what is it we are wishing for?"
Raditzu shook his head slowly. "Let's just discuss this once we have all the balls together."
Reijin laughed and motioned for the two to gather close. "Then to the Namekian it is..." He touched two fingers to his forehead, concentrating... searching for the Ki...
"NO! I'VE CHANGED MY MIND!" Garlic Jr. screamed, suddenly rushing towards them. Raditzu's eyes snapped open, and Garlic Jr's hand touched Reijin's cloak, and suddenly the group found themselves appearring next to Kami.
Silence passed among them. Finally, Garlic Jr. stood up, rubbing his sore head. "You guys suck." was all he said.
Raditzu shook his head in disgust. "Do you kill the worm, or should I?" he spoke slowly.
Reijin just turned to Kami. "So where are they?" he said, pulling out his Dragonball.
Kami just smirked. "Wishing time, is it?" he announced, pulling out his own two.
Reijin turned to Raditzu. "That makes three. Where's yours?" Raditzu shrugged and unzipped his bag, revealing his own three. They all turned to Koola, who tossed his into the center of the circle.
Garlic Jr stood off to the side, eyes open in awe. Raditzu turned to the others. "We are wishing for the power of immortality, right?"
Reijin nodded. "Sounds good to me."
Raditzu turned to the balls, holding his hands over them. He seemed to be concentrating hard, and the balls all seemed to glow. "Oh mighty Shenlong... We summon you!"
An explosion of light filled the desert, and the group shielded their eyes. A loud breathing was heard above them. WHO HAS AWOKEN ME? The voice was deep and loud. The group looked up to see a large dragon hovering over them, seeming to come from the Dragonballs.
Raditzu stepped forward. "I have summoned you."
The dragon's power seemed to crackle with energy. WHAT IS YOUR WISH?
Raditzu took a breath, remembering 18. He knew that he'd promised them immortality... but why live for eternity when the one he loved was dead? He looked up, and swallowed, as the others seemed to await in greedy impatience. 'I wish... that 18-" He was going to wish for her to be brought back... But the smallest member of the group suddenly spoke up, unable to contain himself in his excitement. His little mind had been racing.
"-LOVED ME FOREVER!"
Everyone's eyes snapped to Raditzu first, for changing the wish, and then suddenly to the tiny overlord when his voice was heard. Before the first word could be spoken, or a shot fired, the dragon suddenly spoke.
YOUR WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED.
The Dragonballs suddenly turned to stone, and then floated in the air, circling around and suddenly firing off into different directions, the dragon god vanishing.
Everything was silent for a good five minutes. And then as one, all eyes turned to Garlic Jr. Raditzu looked on the verge of insanity.
Garlic Jr., however, was giddy. "Go ahead! Kill me! And then I can begin my eternity with my Queen!" he laughed anxiously.
**OOC- Ok guys, this is my first RP for a wish, and as I've never posted one before, I wanted some feedback first. What do you think?**
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Burter - 10-17-2004
XD XD XD XD XD
*gives Garlic another 1/2 cool point*
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Kami - 10-17-2004
Oh sheet!
Brilliant!!
Garlic is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo DEAD!!!!!
XD XD XD XD XD
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Raditzu - 10-17-2004
/Supaa Mega Haipaa Dansu
... I guess.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Toshiro - 10-17-2004
Good god... I feel sorry for Garlic.. No.. Wait.. I don't.. I feel sorry for 18..
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Burter - 10-17-2004
Quote:Originally posted by Furiza
Oh my God.
That was the greatest wish in the history of ever.
Burter, I think two cool points are in order o.O
No, he's not THAT cool.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Tobias - 10-17-2004
0.0
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Android-18 - 10-17-2004
I'm confused...
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Android-18 - 10-17-2004
Uh, unless this is an actual IC RP, then no, no I don't.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Reijin - 10-17-2004
Quote:Originally posted by Android-18
Uh, unless this is an actual IC RP, then no, no I don't.
/grins
So does everyone like the review? If so, I'll go ahead and move it to the Earth Forum and delete all the OOC posts.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Hellfighter 17 - 10-17-2004
yeah it's pretty good.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Toshiro - 10-17-2004
I don't think ya should.. Personally..
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Hellfighter 17 - 10-17-2004
It's pretty good RP wise, but Janemba is right.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Tobias - 10-17-2004
You were serious. 8o
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Zarbon - 10-17-2004
That is a damn good RP post.
BUT there better be away for 18 to get back to normal, i mean come on! Who wants to love a teal midget?
Oh, sorry Garlic
.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Tobias - 10-17-2004
I dont think she has choice in the matter
)... but seriously... no matter how funny thats a waste of a wish. Give Furiza a penis or something useful.ALSO I never actualy met 18 IC... I migt have seen her but I wouldnt know who they were talking about...meaning I wouldnt know who to look for for the sexu, and that wouldnt be good.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Tobias - 10-18-2004
You cant spell "trating". Thats why i left y ou.
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Tobias - 10-18-2004
H ey i Dnot NeEd LeCterign frm Yuo!
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Reijin - 10-18-2004
Quote:Originally posted by King Cold
Quote:Originally posted by Garlic Jr
You cant spell "trating". Thats why i left y ou.
This from the man who put a space in the word you and didn't capitolize "I". Wow.
You forgot to mention his lack of an apostrophe in the word "can't".
Oh Mighty Shenlong! - Zarbon - 10-18-2004
Well, are you going to post this or what? Or is 18 uneasy.
I can imagine the pure humourism of an android, suddenly falling madly in love with a pointy earred, big nosed, teal midget! HA HA!!!