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The Pantheon: RotNG - Yamu - 07-29-2007
Well, you were wrong.
When i put up rewards I'm going to make a critique sheet to see what y'all though, I'm just WAY to out of it to do it tonight.
The Pantheon: RotNG - Pan - 07-29-2007
Wow one hell of an ending Yamu!
The Pantheon: RotNG - Jesper - 07-29-2007
Bujin > all of you.
The Pantheon: RotNG - Yamu - 07-29-2007
The Pantheon Critique Sheet
With people wanting to give feedback to Staff, I figure it would be more productive to actually have it based on something not just ‘What do you think of…’
So, if you please, give a rank one to five, ‘one’ being it sucked or hell no, ‘five’ being ‘kick ass’ or ‘yes, in a heartbeat, in the following categories and if you have actual comments PLEASE add them. I want to do something like this again and it would help to know where people loved and where y’all think it could be approved upon. Because, really, this shit is for you to enjoy.
Event Frequency:
Event Length:
Did you feel Events helped in your own writing?:
Did you feel Events helped progress the story as a whole?:
Did you enjoy reading Events or just feel they were a chore?:
Event Overall:
Did you feel YOUR character was RP’ed accurately?
Did you feel OTHER people’s characters were Rp’ed accurately?
Did you feel you character got the Event time they deserved?
Characters Overall:
Finale Overall:
Would you participate in another Saga run by Yamu?:
Do you prefer Story Saga or Competitions?
What was your favorite Pantheon moment?
Other Comments:
The Pantheon: RotNG - Jesper - 07-29-2007
Event Frequency: 4
Event Length: 3
Did you feel Events helped in your own writing?: 2
Maybe I'm just stupid or didn't understand something important, but I got too confused to continue with everything else happening in real life.
Did you feel Events helped progress the story as a whole?: 4
Yeah, if you understood them, then you'd see that they were actually relevant.
Did you enjoy reading Events or just feel they were a chore? : 4
They were short enough to keep my attention.
Event Overall: 3
Did you feel YOUR character was RP’ed accurately?
Yeah, I guess. You really got his confident problem down, but he could have standed to have more sarcastic comments. Overall, that section was about a 4.
Did you feel OTHER people’s characters were Rp’ed accurately?
Don't really know. There weren't a lot of writers there that I follow. You roleplayed your character pretty well, though. xD So...a three, I guess.
Did you feel you character got the Event time they deserved?
Yeah, for the lack of activity on my part, I think Bujin got a lot. A four.
Characters Overall: 4
Finale Overall: 4
Would you participate in another Saga run by Yamu?:
Yeah, I would.
Do you prefer Story Saga or Competitions?
It depends. Competitions are done too often, but story sagas tend to drag after a while. Have a mixture, and you got yourself a winner.
What was your favorite Pantheon moment?
Bujin's sacrifice, for obvious reasons.
Other Comments:
Overall, you did well. You just have to explain what to do EXACTLY for slow people like me. xD
The Pantheon: RotNG - Mal Nova - 07-29-2007
Yamu Wrote:He is a gigantic wolf, with a thick gray mane like a lion almost. He is immortal, he was once an Old Kingdom God but has lost his powers because of his loyalty to the humans of Earth, something Amun-Ra just could not have so he took his powers. He represents duty and loyalty and is thus drawn to Piccolo's side, but is not physically linked to him.
Wepwawet has his own energy, and can fire a powerful beam from his mouth. He can talk just like any human could.
I hope that clears everything up.
See Immortal
The Pantheon: RotNG - Mal Nova - 07-29-2007
Event Frequency: Wth is event frequency? How frequent the events were? Eh... 4.2
Event Length: 4.2
Did you feel Events helped in your own writing?: 4.5
Did you feel Events helped progress the story as a whole?: 4.9
Did you enjoy reading Events or just feel they were a chore?: 3.9
The events with 16 seemed to be a chore to me.
Event Overall:4.3
Did you feel YOUR character was RP’ed accurately? 3.9
Somethings he had done in other peoples control, I couldn't see him do. Like picking his nails with his scythe.
Did you feel OTHER people’s characters were Rp’ed accurately? FIIK 4.3
Did you feel you character got the Event time they deserved? 5
Characters Overall:4.5
Finale Overall:4.6
Would you participate in another Saga run by Yamu?: 5
Do you prefer Story Saga or Competitions? 5.6 Wait.... it depends. I like alot of them
What was your favorite Pantheon moment?
-Err Retane getting KS4
-Retane killing Bujin
-Retane killing Winapeg
-Retane killing Micheal
-Retane vs Picc! Assassin vs Prince!
-Fog of War Horsemen style!
-Mino killing Yamu
-Yamu's Flash Forward!
Other Comments: Err 'nuff said?
The Pantheon: RotNG - Pan - 07-30-2007
Event Frequency: 3.5
Event Length: 4.5
Did you feel Events helped in your own writing?: 4 Gave me a way to initiate action
Did you feel Events helped progress the story as a whole?: 4
Did you enjoy reading Events or just feel they were a chore?: 4
Event Overall: 4.25
Did you feel YOUR character was RP’ed accurately?: 4.5
Did you feel OTHER people’s characters were Rp’ed accurately? 3 don't know the others that well.
Did you feel you character got the Event time they deserved? 4.5
Characters Overall: 4.5
Finale Overall: 5 Damn suspence had me checking the friggin board every ten minutes
Would you participate in another Saga run by Yamu?: Hell,yes... i mean 5
Do you prefer Story Saga or Competitions? havn't been in a compatition yet so I Don't know yet
What was your favorite Pantheon moment? The Final Battle!
Other Comments: Great job, man willing and ready to go on another saga later.
The Pantheon: RotNG - Aero - 07-30-2007
Event Frequency: 4
Event Length: 3
Did you feel Events helped in your own writing?: I guess, in a way.
Did you feel Events helped progress the story as a whole?: Yesh.
Did you enjoy reading Events or just feel they were a chore?: Most of them I enjoyed. Well, at least I enjoyed the bits that included me.
Event Overall: 4
Did you feel YOUR character was RP’ed accurately? Yeah. You extracted the bits of personality I alluded to and used it well.
Did you feel OTHER people’s characters were Rp’ed accurately? Uhm . . . I thought Zangya probably was. Didn't really pay attention to others though.
Did you feel your character got the Event time they deserved? Sure. Gokua was never considered as a main character by others anyway.
Characters Overall: 4
Finale Overall: 4.5
Would you participate in another Saga run by Yamu?: Sure.
Do you prefer Story Saga or Competitions? Uhm . . . depends on how well it's done.
What was your favorite Pantheon moment? Probably my fight with Mura. I could've done better, but what the hey. It was mildly entertaining.
Other Comments: Nope.
The Pantheon: RotNG - Jewtastic - 07-30-2007
Event Frequency: 4.5 (I don't really know what this one means but I liked the saga as a whole so this gets a nice score from me.)
Event Length: 4
Did you feel Events helped in your own writing?: That it did. Much more to write about.
Did you feel Events helped progress the story as a whole?: yeppers
Did you enjoy reading Events or just feel they were a chore?: For the most part yes i did. I skimmed through some of the ones for the inactive characters, but read most the others.
Event Overall: 5
Did you feel YOUR character was RP’ed accurately? I do. I know I PMed you a couple times in there asking for certian things. I thank you for getting them in, and staying true to the ninja.
Did you feel OTHER people’s characters were Rp’ed accurately? I don't really know most of the personalites of people in the saga but on a whole I would say they were. I didn't see any gripes so I think you did a good job.
Did you feel your character got the Event time they deserved? I do.
Characters Overall: 4
Finale Overall: 5
Would you participate in another Saga run by Yamu?: I would.
Do you prefer Story Saga or Competitions? For the most part Story sagas. I'd much rather write in a story then a random competition.
What was your favorite Pantheon moment? I have a couple. First and foremost my fight with Gokua. While not as many posts as I would have liked to get up, the posts really were great.
All the God powers were great...I am definatly keeping mine.
Other Comments: Get rewards up
