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Pre-Liminary Round 2: Reijin's Group - Reijin - 07-12-2006 IMPORTANT: Holy fuckzorz. I read through all of the first drafts and PMed my opinion of them to you. As usually happens, the due date has suddenly been thrust out. That's right, I no longer care about a second draft. I want to see the final product so we can get this going. For any that have turned in a second draft, more power to you for being ahead of the game. For those that haven't, tough shit. Goku Jr is still allowed one more entry by the due date, however, if I do not recieve it by then, I will take his previous entry as his official final draft. I'd like a response from him acknowledging this if at all able. Due Date:
Sunday - 1:00 AM EST. Pre-Liminary Round 2: Reijin's Group - Violet - 07-12-2006 My final has been submitted. I can't really think of anything else more to do with it, but I pmmed it to you. Mind if I post the link to it in here? Pre-Liminary Round 2: Reijin's Group - Reijin - 07-12-2006 To keep from someone stealing ideas from each other, I'd like to wait until all submissions are made before I reveal them. In actuality, there were a couple that seemed to be almost direct copies with a few numbers changed around. I'll get into that after the finals though. Pre-Liminary Round 2: Reijin's Group - Reijin - 07-12-2006 Quote:Originally posted by Reijin I said this before that since you misunderstood that I will allow you another entry if you wish. If you don't feel like taking advantage of the opportunity, that's your choice. Pre-Liminary Round 2: Reijin's Group - Reijin - 07-16-2006 It's now 1:45 AM Sunday morning. I gave some extra time, but recieved nothing for it. I will be counting all applicants as having submitted their finals and will be grading them as such. I will not be accepting any further submissions. Pre-Liminary Round 2: Reijin's Group - Reijin - 07-19-2006 BLUE: Quote:Name: (Keep it within racial parameters. Eg: Nameks don?t have the name Joe. Also, We don?t allow backslashes, dashes, underscores, or anything like that as part of a name.) Blue... Yours was very... Simple. It was organized, but it seemed like something typed up fairly quickly. In most cases that is ok, but this was what I had to accept as a final draft. I feel that a large amount of your categories needed more to it. Honestly, I had a hard time reading through this until I reached the second section of it, beginning at Races. Your method of penalizing the joinees for their customization is a slightly different idea, but would require a large amount of work on the part of the staff in order to keep up with exactly how many people are customs of a race. This could be solved by the use of a Keyword on the roster to search for rather easily, however in execution... I don't really like the idea of the penalty changing depending on the number of characters of that type. Not in a rigid way as you did. What would obviously happen is that the maximum penalty would always be in effect. The lower one will only matter as soon as this kicked into effect. GOKU JR. Quote:Although, custom characters have to be taken for granted. There are only a few ways to stop the custom character system from being overthrown, and that would be to tackle the amounts of racial requests available on the RPG and make the availability a little less then usual. This would ensure a healthy balance between the races that are available to be chosen. For example, the most rare race that is almost always forgotten would be the human race. Although there is an entire planet based solely on them, no-one ever signifies them and refers to them as the most customizable race in the entire universe. So for example, increasing the amount of custom humans and nameks available and decreasing the amount of other races for custom characters to be created, there would be a stable fixture of both races without overdoing it. Goku Jr... Your post is a lot more elegeant writing, and a bit easier to read. I really like how you explained yourself on things with the descriptions about not taking a custom character and ripping another just b/c you were denied on a guy. I like that you incorporated in that they would need to actually work with our universe and your way of looking at why a penalty should be done and how. In the end, I actually found yours to be fairly thought out, and despite this being your second draft period, it still seems to be fairly complete with what I am looking for. I very much like your viewpoint about MIA and custom characters. I share the same opinion although there would still be some form of purging, just on a far more distant basis; six months or so. VIOLET: Quote:http://www.midnight.excell.org/priv/customchars.html Violet... You took your presentation to another level. I don't mind this, but I don't want to use this as a major advantage as not everyone has access to this. Knowing that you understand this, I wish to delve into the actual information. I like how you bring the members in with a very personal style of writing. It helped to keep my attention greatly. I like your way of increasing the beginning requirements for aquiring a custom character, along with your method of the penalty based on density without an actual cap. However, your information did seem to be copied from others work at times. I'll make the assumption that the previous event was team based although it is still an advantage on your end that others didn't have. As far as the chart for racial abilities and penalties goes, I like that. I disagree with some of the specifics and numbers, but the idea itself is a very good one. It adds a 'flavor' to the race and keeps it from being "holy crap I want a saiyan just because". I feel that your MIA rules are a bit overly strict, from the viewpoint of knowing the reason that MIA is in place in origin. Do you really feel a need to clean people off of the roster without needing that slot open for other people? However, I can see having some method of cleaning people off as well in order to keep the penalty from being capped out for no reason. Finally, I really like your tips section despite the fact that we both know that no new member would ever read anything on there other than the link to the Join forum. Pre-Liminary Round 2: Reijin's Group - Reijin - 07-19-2006 I've come to my decision. First, I would like to apologize for the wait. I have already spoken to Burter via PM about some issues and my method of handling it, and this will be my last Idol until I have some things taken care of. I didn't want to rush this, as it is very important to some people. I know it took a while, but I hope you understand that I wanted to leave you guys with the understanding that I DID read over it, and didn't just judge quickly, but rather actually gave your entries the attention that they DESERVED. That being said, I am ready. . . . . Continuing into this round, I could have taken the easy route. I could have made my decision a loooong time ago over the fact that Silver was eliminated early. I could have just let that go, but I wouldn't feel right about those that put in the effort. However, I do know that I can still just judge that Silver is the only elimination and that you three are safe from your effort. . . . I'm sorry, but Blue, I don't feel that you put enough into this. You told me in advance and that really helped you out. I gave you the opportunity to do what you could, and you did. I really appreciate that. However, when compared to the others, I can't deny the large amount of things I was dissappointed in. Blue, you are not XTREME Goku Jr. Your post was sent in immediate, followed up quickly by your second and apparently final draft. However, I feel that this didn't cause you any problem and that you did a very good job with a well thought out entry. I am somewhat impressed. I was on the rocks about you for a bit, but I feel you still have some more to contribute here. Good luck in future rounds. Goku Jr, you will proceed Violet, I knew in my initial view of your entry that it was something very different from the other applicants. You went about things in a fairly different manner that greatly grasped me and left me rather impressed. You have a good concept of what you are doing, and I feel that you have a lot more fight for this competition. 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