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Grades - Saz - 05-12-2007
Let's see how I fare
Grades - Burter - 05-12-2007
B
Grades - OldSpice - 05-12-2007
Dante's Abyss 2007 Sign-Ups
I'm not 100% satisfied with it, but why not.
Grades - Burter - 05-12-2007
C. Good writing, I was just kinda lost. Like coming into a sequel of a movie without a recap of the first
Grades - OldSpice - 05-12-2007
Yeah, I was going to slowly explain things as my storyline progressed. Kind of like how certain movies show a portion of the ending as the opening.
Grades - Burter - 05-12-2007
Then it'll all work out as a whole, but as just one part of the movie, it doesn't work
Grades - Bujin - 05-13-2007
My second post in the thread.
Grades - OldSpice - 05-13-2007
New Storyline, New Post
This'll be my last one, promise =).
Grades - Retane - 05-13-2007
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Grades - Burter - 05-13-2007
Bujin: A
Spice: B
Retane: B-
Grades - Retane - 05-13-2007
Serious?
Wow I thought it would suck because I know it hinted to my characters past and might loose some people or something.
Grades - Burter - 05-13-2007
I followed it okay, it was just a little boring
Grades - Retane - 05-13-2007
Well I typed it half assed drunk cuz I knew this dumb broad would want to have sex when I went to bed. I stopped in the middle because I knew I was tore up and went to bed and when I woke up atfter 2PM, I started fixing and rewriting parts and when I was about to tihnk about trying to make it real intersting I was rushed for some unknown reason. My guess is she wanted to have sex with her freind from virgina but thats a different story lol
My RP's are building up towards Retane's past since I left. You'll understand more in the Rp I'm writing.
Grades - Tapion - 05-14-2007
If you don't mind, wanna take a crack at my sign up?
Grades - Burter - 05-14-2007
B
Grades - Kirano - 05-22-2007
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Grades - Jeice - 05-22-2007
Grade my first post in the spar, if you will
.Yamu vs Jeice
Grades - Yamu - 05-22-2007
Yamu vs. Jeice 2
If you have the time with everything going down today.
Grades - Raspberry - 05-22-2007
Me by any chance?
Grades - Burter - 05-22-2007
Bulma: B. Dialogue was hilarious but it got a little out of control. Try to read what you write out loud and see how it sounds when it spoken
Jeice: B. Good for what it was (an action post)
Yamu: A.
Raspberry: B.