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Reijin!!! - Aqua - 04-10-2007
Screw you guys, I actually lol'ed while writing my last one. It was supposed to be a rap roast, not a poetry contest.
Reijin!!! - Lucifer - 04-10-2007
Rarely is it seen,
Always understated in its excellence.
Poetry of such calibre is a rare find.
Internally it creates a despondant feeling
Suited to the melancholy tone of its words.
Soon all shall become dust and nothingness.
Terrible is the wrath of the ages,
Unbelievably tearing through the fabric of time.
Perfect in its own bitter simplicity.
Incandescent with rage eternity stands,
Deprived of hope or caring.
Tambourines play out a bitter dirge,
Only to be heard by the most sinister of denizens.
Tomorrow shall not ring in their ears.
Today shall be lost in their screams.
Even the dogs shall cry out in horror.
Perfect darkness encompassing all.
Only hatred shall not be extinguished.
Love and harmony shall be tossed to the wind.
Into the fiery abyss go all that was once essential to humanity.
Krackens shall leap from the oceans.
Eternity shall stand on the shore.
Sovereignty shall belong to the fires of sin.
Always keeping in mind,
Never forgetting the importance of identifying forms of poetry.
A lot of poetic styles are difficult to spot.
Like this accrostic.
Reijin!!! - Aqua - 04-10-2007
*cocks shotgun and points at my own temple*
poetry...
;(
Reijin!!! - Lucifer - 04-10-2007
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
*cocks shotgun and points at my own temple*
poetry...
;(
As most people do with poetry, you're so missing the point.
Reijin!!! - Aqua - 04-10-2007
Quote:Originally posted by Lucifer
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
*cocks shotgun and points at my own temple*
poetry...
;(
As most people do with poetry, you're so missing the point.
Just because I don't care for it, that doesn't mean I don't understand it.
Reijin!!! - Lucifer - 04-10-2007
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
Quote:Originally posted by Lucifer
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
*cocks shotgun and points at my own temple*
poetry...
;(
As most people do with poetry, you're so missing the point.
Just because I don't care for it, that doesn't mean I don't understand it.
Look up accrostic in your dictionary.
Reijin!!! - Aqua - 04-10-2007
Quote:Originally posted by Lucifer
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
Quote:Originally posted by Lucifer
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
*cocks shotgun and points at my own temple*
poetry...
;(
As most people do with poetry, you're so missing the point.
Just because I don't care for it, that doesn't mean I don't understand it.
Look up accrostic in your dictionary.
It's acrostic, and I get it. Props for being original, but I was just fond of the idea of rapping for a change of pace. Still not a huge fan of poetry, but you did a nice job either way.
Reijin!!! - Lucifer - 04-10-2007
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
Quote:Originally posted by Lucifer
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
Quote:Originally posted by Lucifer
Quote:Originally posted by Aqua
*cocks shotgun and points at my own temple*
poetry...
;(
As most people do with poetry, you're so missing the point.
Just because I don't care for it, that doesn't mean I don't understand it.
Look up accrostic in your dictionary.
It's acrostic, and I get it. Props for being original, but I was just fond of the idea of rapping for a change of pace. Still not a huge fan of poetry, but you did a nice job either way.
Oh good. I thought you thought I was being pretentious and not witless and childish. =D
Reijin!!! - Bojack - 04-10-2007
I really despise poetry. I'd rather read (a book) than decode (a poem). =(
Reijin!!! - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 04-10-2007
Quote:Originally posted by Lucifer
Rarely is it seen,
Always understated in its excellence.
Poetry of such calibre is a rare find.
Internally it creates a despondant feeling
Suited to the melancholy tone of its words.
Soon all shall become dust and nothingness.
Terrible is the wrath of the ages,
Unbelievably tearing through the fabric of time.
Perfect in its own bitter simplicity.
Incandescent with rage eternity stands,
Deprived of hope or caring.
Tambourines play out a bitter dirge,
Only to be heard by the most sinister of denizens.
Tomorrow shall not ring in their ears.
Today shall be lost in their screams.
Even the dogs shall cry out in horror.
Perfect darkness encompassing all.
Only hatred shall not be extinguished.
Love and harmony shall be tossed to the wind.
Into the fiery abyss go all that was once essential to humanity.
Krackens shall leap from the oceans.
Eternity shall stand on the shore.
Sovereignty shall belong to the fires of sin.
Always keeping in mind,
Never forgetting the importance of identifying forms of poetry.
A lot of poetic styles are difficult to spot.
Like this accrostic.
xD
Your Words Inspire Me.
xD
It's also very true.
Anywho, I'm recording a random rap song for Chubbs now.
Reijin!!! - Celipa - 04-11-2007
I don't know how you guys can NOT see the comedic genius of that. I was all led on and stuff like, "WHAT'S WILL GONNA DO THIS TIME!?", and then...BAM.
Reijin!!! - Bra - 04-11-2007
Quote:Originally posted by Burter
Will still wins
I agree.
If I say I forgot about him, will you make fun of me? <.<
Reijin!!! - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 04-11-2007
Rap done check it out "Chubbs Anthem"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=353073
Lyrics:
Aint no motha fuckas steppin to my blast
dash past that bastard
and unleash my attack
im unstoppable
you can't beat me
because I'm Raditzu
and i've RPed since grade 3
i have no life and i have one friend
and that's because i met him on the internetland
lets not make fun of him, lets move to rebnik
burter for short and he's Willian's bitch (just kidding)
VJ owns the spot, and owns our souls
and we all know he's a pimp because he
boned some brazilian hoes
what were you expecting, i'm only fifteen
but i used to be the youngest and liked masturbating
chubbs is the home, to an amazing community
with minigames like survivor where we win our immunity
just look around the place
isn't it great?
FUCK ALL of YOU HATERS
that steal what we create
were original
with subliminal messages
to steal your soul like professional criminals
teleport dodge, stab, jab, dash
get whiplash from a tremendous force
as you burn into ash
expediate the procedure with a transformation
as you power up to a new level
or become a new creation
garlic jr. knows how to keep shit straight
flauntin his stuff like he's the ace of spade
then you got bra, but he's a canadian
so is Android 18 but she's hot for a non-american
shower scenes, sex scenes, blessings for all
she was one who truly brought a tingle to our balls
next is reijin, if that's how it's pronounced
fuck the japanese, i'd rather sound it out
he's shown us true gangsta, in ghetto dante's abyss
so i have no reason to even try to diss
now check it out, because that's not all
as my kamehameha hits ya and you begin to dissolve
newbies whinin bout customs n shit
now we bout to have a fuckin reset in dis bitch
Reijin!!! - Bojack - 04-11-2007
XD
/famous
Reijin!!! - Burter - 04-11-2007
I love the just kidding, because he knows I'll fucking kill him.
=x
Reijin!!! - Bojack - 04-11-2007
I'm putting this on my IPod.
And Evan wins, btw.
Reijin!!! - Captain Silver - 04-11-2007
Priceless.
Reijin!!! - Aqua - 04-11-2007
I <3 Chubbs
Reijin!!! - Captain Silver - 04-11-2007
I <3 Intranetx
Reijin!!! - Sammah - 04-12-2007
lol good... now im workin one
stay tuned