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A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-08-2007
I was just wondering what others thought about my current posts for telepathy. What I would need to improve on or what I'm doing completely wrong lol that kind of thing. However, if your going to look at it and everything please keep in mind that this training confuses the hell out of me on where to start and such, so many of my posts are short.
.Finding One's Self
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-11-2007
No C&C for me
? lol. 
.I posted a few more times so if anyone's up for the task please choose one the last few to give C&C to.
A Little Reveiw? - Dehan - 01-12-2007
I'm enjoyin it, keep it up.
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-12-2007
Yay I have a fan
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A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-12-2007
Woohoo two fans!
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-12-2007
Thats good enough 8). Thanks for the pointers also
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-15-2007
Few new posts, C&C por favor
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A Little Reveiw? - Saz - 01-15-2007
I don't know about C&C but you sure are active, I commend you for that, I know how differcult it is to stay motivated when rping by yourself. I'll read through some of it and try and see whether I can offer any pointers.
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-15-2007
Thanks man I realy appreciate.
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-22-2007
Two new posts...any thoughts?
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-28-2007
What do you guys think about the way I did things so far...what do you guys think I should've done differently and such?
A Little Reveiw? - Alsa - 01-29-2007
Getting better, you've improved alot. 9.2/10
A Little Reveiw? - Veritas - 01-29-2007
Thanks.