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Kokukashing Character Application - Kokukashin - 02-15-2009
Name: My character's name is Kokukashin. In Kanji, it is spelled as "黒火森", which roughly translates into English as "Black Fire Forrest".
Age: 34
Race: Saiyan
Sex: Male
Starting Planet: Earth
Profession: Kokushin is a highly skilled scientist, however, he doesn't work for any organizations.
Fighting Style: Mathematical, if you will. Kokukashin's calculates how he can inflict the most damage on his opponent, while taking the least. Although he appears to pay his enemies little attention, he is very focused on their moves so he can prepare his best defense.
Short Bio:
Like most Saiyans, Kokukashin was born on planet Vegeta. He was raised by his father, who was always looked down upon other Saiyans because he took more interest in science than in fighting.
Kokukashin's was brought up learning the basics of fighting, although, like his father, he enjoyed science more. Soon, he started to mix the two past times together. He made many inventions that aided his fighting skills.
One day, Kokukashin went to the King of Vegeta's Palace to participate in the Saiyan tournament. Even though he was only fifteen, he was matched up against a tough guard that ranked high up in the hierarchy of the planet. Using a cybernetic arm he built for himself, he was able to defeat the guard. This disgusted the King, yet he decided not to execute the boy, because that would be shameful on his part. Instead, he fired up a capsule, and sent the teenager to out into space, which is when he accidently landed on Earth.
General Description:
Lips: His lips were cut off by his father as a punishment, so he appears to always be smiling, because his teeth are always exposed.
Hair- Short, Black, and Spiky
Build- Rather tall (6 foot), however, he only ways 150 pounds due to malnutrition.
Eyes- Black
Skin- Pale
Clothing- An inverted scientist suit (White shirt and pants, with a long, black outer robe)
Starting Abilities: Regeneration, and Foresight
Trait: Self-Centered, Cold
Stats:
Strength-15
Focus-20
Endurance-40
Agility- 25
Role Play:
Kokukashin wildly punched the keys of his mega-computer in a complex way. He could almost taste the victory that he knew he was about to enjoy.
Suddenly, a huge explosive sound could be heard. Kokukashin looked up at the 3 foot thick, stainless steel door that was the sole entrance to his lab. It had been destroyed by the blast, to see an old enemy, the Chief of Police for South City.
"It's been a long time, hasn't it Shin?" The man said as he puffed a cigar.
The Chief was not alone. Behind him was at least 10 men, all dressed in S.W.A.T team uniforms.
"I thought I told you not to call me by that name..." Kokukashin said with patience.
"I think I have the authority to do as I like, thank you very much."
"Is that so?" Kokukashin said, standing from his computer desk fearlessly, as if there wasn't a small army of armed men nearby.
He stood still as a vision of the future clouded the future. In the vision, all ten men held up their rifles, and executed Kokukashin.
"Well, that just won't do...." Kokukashin muttered.
"What did you see?" The Chief asked, fully aware that every time Kokukashin's eye's grew red, he was seeing a vision.
Kokukashin ignored the inquiry, instead holding up his left arm, which had modified into a machine quite a while ago.
"Put your arm down!" The Chief demanded.
Kokukashin ignored the order again, and shot his five metallic fingers out of his hand like they were the spears of a spear gun. Each finger had a metal cord connecting it to the hand even after being fired. The five fingers wrapped around the Chief, and every soldier raised their gun. Before the guns were even completely raised, Kokukashin had retracted his fingers back, along with the Chief.
"Don't swing such dangerous things around." Kokukashin said mockingly to the soldiers "Or you might hurt your friend".
Kokukashin tightened the cords that were now around the Chiefs throat. With his free hand, he reached into his pocket, and pulled out a Syringe filled with purple liquid.
"Here's the deal. This Syringe is filled with a something I like to call 'liquid death.' If you want your friend to live, you will each drop the weapons by the time I count to three."
The Chief tried to yell something, but Kokukashin tightened the cords yet another time, making it near impossible for the Chief to even breathe.
"1"
Nobody budged.
"2"
Yet again, not a single soldier budged.
"3".
It was obvious that the soldiers had no intention of releasing their arms.
"Okay then." Kokukashin said as he pricked the needle into The Chief's eye ball.
The Chief let out a scream, but none of the soldier's dare tried to shoot Kokukashin, because they knew they could miss, and hit their boss.
The Chief's eye starting to mutate and bubble, and by now, the Chief was screaming so loudly that he could probably be heard miles away. The eye popped open after turning red, and puss seeped down the Cheif's face.
"Let's try this again. I want each of you to put your guns on the floor."
"Please!!!" The Chief hissed despite the face he was almost suffocated, and talking made it worse.
The soldier's but down their guns reluctantly.
"Good...." Kokukashin whispered.
To his surprise, the soldiers came running empty handed towards him. Kokukashin sighed with no sign of fear. He stabbed the syringe into his hostage's spinal cord, and let him fall to the floor.
He then thrusted his index finger out, which stabbed through a man. He through the man into one of his comrades, then proceeded to fight the rest of the men.
Twenty minutes passed, and each man was dead, and Kokukashin was back on his computer, trying to finalize his latest invention.
Kokukashing Character Application - Kazuya - 02-15-2009
You have potential to improve your writing, you just need some practice. This place would be great for you to develop a greater variety of flavors for your writing over time. With that, everything looks good, and I'll get you set up shortly.
Welcome to Chubbs.
Also, your trait? We have a few different classifications, from what it sounds like, you would prefer Lone Wolf, yea?
Kokukashing Character Application - Kokukashin - 02-15-2009
First off, sorry for the poor quality of my application, I kind of rushed it just so I could get into the "Real" RPG.
Also, I didn't know there was certain trait categories, but yes, "Lone Wolf" does sound appropriate. Thank you!