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[C&C] Kiso - Ren - 12-02-2009
This is not something anyone has to do. I am just wondering if someone could read my stuff over and give me some pointers. Maybe some clues as to what I can do to improve. Heck maybe a few key words or thoughts on my character. I know I am not the greatest writer nor am I the greatest idea maker right now but I am trying to come up with something interesting for my character so anything you can do to help me improve would be greatfully accepted.
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