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Critique - Tobias - 06-25-2004 Hey I was just wonderin what the peeps thought of my RPing abilities and mainly my personal saga "Help! Im a Midget Demon From Another Dimension". I would like some feedback, even if its just -j00 r teh sux- I wanna hear it. And be honest, Im a big boy I can handle it. Critique - Tobias - 06-25-2004 >.< This is clearly some sort of trick...frieza...complimet...me!? Yea, as Garlic is pretty much clueless things will get explained through the RP to him. And indirectly to the reader. As i said this one will be heavy in egyptian mythology which i have always been pretty interested in. Critique - Bra - 06-25-2004 Yeah, I thought it was pretty cool, too. And I'll bet the similarities between "Garr" and Garlic Jr are more than coincidental. You're taking your RP in a very original direction, and, to agree with Frieza, I think it's pretty cool. Critique - Tobias - 06-25-2004 Mabey it is a coincidence *wink* I have some pics i drew in paint.I dont pretend to be an artist but while I draw I think of my story and thats how I get my ideas. It gets my creative juices flowing. That and the toilet. Mabey im thinkin of the the wrong juice on that one though. Horus Garr Critique - Tobias - 06-25-2004 *shrugs* like i said Im thinkin of my story while im doodlin so I have no Idea.Im basically half aware while im drawin it. . -_o im also mildly insane.