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Feedback? - Burter - 07-03-2004

Okay, first, please dont spam this.

I just finished what I feel is possibly the best fight I have ever written. I'd like feedback on the Burter vs Big Bad Dragon guy.

Also, what did people think of the roleplay? Not the saga, or the plot to the saga, but the roleplay itself? I think it was the most fun i've ever had writing a roleplay, and I really enjoyed it.

..did you?


Feedback? - Bra - 07-03-2004

That... was awesome!
You added so many facets of the storyline into the roleplay, and really added a personal backdrop with Burter's thoughts and such, damn.
It was cool.


Feedback? - Burter - 07-04-2004

Quote:Originally posted by Bra
That... was awesome!
You added so many facets of the storyline into the roleplay, and really added a personal backdrop with Burter's thoughts and such, damn.
It was cool.

Bra got some development too Smile


Feedback? - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 07-04-2004

It was very well done.


Feedback? - Burter - 07-04-2004

Shut up >_< That fight wasn't any good


Feedback? - Burter - 07-04-2004

YOU DOWNLOADED MY MATCHS!?

DELETE THEM! NOW!


Feedback? - Burter - 07-04-2004

Hehe, Bra, i didn't where to put it but your rp kicked ass Smile


Feedback? - Bra - 07-04-2004

^_^
Thanks. It was intense just writing the thing, I was really trying to make your death be all cool... and... yeah. Thanks.

*Kills Tapion*


Feedback? - Kami - 07-04-2004

I read it and then had to go change my pants
8o


Feedback? - Burter - 07-04-2004

Quote:Originally posted by Kami
I read it and then had to go change my pants
8o

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