+- CDBZ Archive (http://alex.zulenka.com)
+-- Forum: Sagas (http://alex.zulenka.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=275)
+--- Forum: Dante's Abyss 2005 (http://alex.zulenka.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=169)
+---- Forum: Dante's Abyss - Discussions (http://alex.zulenka.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=219)
+---- Thread: Rateage! (/showthread.php?tid=23722)
Rateage! - Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2004
I was wondering if somebody could tell me how good I did on my last post, I think it is the first good one I have ever done, so I need some feedback.
Other people can also us ethsi for feedback, so it can go on and on as long as people give helpful criticism to thsoe who want it.
Rateage! - Android-18 - 12-09-2004
What do you guys think of my RPing? I'm not even trying yet...
Yeah I suggest making shorter paragraphs HF ^^.
Rateage! - Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2004
Yea, I guess I could have seperated them a bit more, I just got to into that post to think to do that. So anything else?
I liked your second post, 18, it seemed to have more in it to me. But yea I could tell you weren't trying your best after the King Kai quests that I read. But they were still good
Rateage! - Minoshia - 12-09-2004
How am i RPing in DA? for anyone that just wants to read something check out mine in AREA A, so you can be teh roxors and post here... I feel like im RPing sub-par and i can't put my finger on why, someone help?
Rateage! - Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2004
Better, or worse?
Rateage! - Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2004
I was referring to my latest post. -_-
Rateage! - Burter - 12-09-2004
Rate each other, yeesh. That'll solve everyone's problem. If you want to get feedback, give some
Rateage! - Hellfighter 17 - 12-09-2004
Well, for Minoshia I like the posts, maybe he feels as though he doesn't have much character building for himself.
Rateage! - Ruhiel - 12-10-2004
Could someone give me a feeling on if I need to do a little more to my post in the KC vs. 20 and Zarbon fight? I don't want either of us to die, and if we aren't gonna, I know we'll need to rp pretty good.
Rateage! - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 12-10-2004
Minoshia feels like he's doing crappy. And I have to agree his skills are losing what they used to...13 is good.
I can't RP worth crap ever since that huge post in the Archers quest. What will I ever do?