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i want to join - Android-18 - 09-28-2005
Read the join page on the main site: http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com
i want to join - Reijin - 09-28-2005
Um, I'm going to have to request that you try another roleplay. That was more like an entire sentence repeating the same word.
i want to join - Reijin - 09-28-2005
300 words, not counting any variation of the word "Buu"
i want to join - Android-18 - 09-29-2005
It's...well, kind of poor. It's very hard to understand. Is english your second language? Because you seem to have problems handling all of the english structure lol. Not to mention the entire thing looks like a run on sentence, no periods. I think that you need to practice more before we can accept you. Try reading the RPs around the site, get a feel for how it's done, and I really suggest Microsoft Word.
i want to join - Reijin - 09-29-2005
You stole this rp from another thread. As Slug said, that is probably the greatest method of getting yourself on our badside, as the reason we are here is to become better writers. If you steal someone else's work, then you obviously are not wanting to become a better writer. If that is the case, then we have no place for you. And being Dutch is no excuse. Our resident Vejita Jr, current owner, is Dutch himself. Him and his silly wooden shoes. In short, do not try here again.
*locksu*