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Join - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 10-27-2005
You need a roleplay sample and two moves you want.
Join - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 10-27-2005
There are no restrictions except that you can choose three different ones.
Join - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 10-27-2005
The roleplay sample is good except for one part. Your dialogue. You had it like this:
Quote:Piccalo " Do you think that you have improved"
When not only did you spell Piccolo wrong, but instead it should be something like this:
Quote:Piccolo questioned his friend, "Do you think that you have improved?"
Or
Quote:" Do you think that you have improved" Piccolo inquired.
I hope you understand.
And also, we write past tense here. You are writing present, so instead of "Piccolo flies over there" it would be "Piccolo flew over there".
And also your three moves and you can register.
Join - The Not Cool Not Tapion - 10-27-2005
Register and you'll be activated.
Join - Hellfighter 17 - 10-28-2005
If you aren't activated within 72 hours, post here.
Join - Android-18 - 10-28-2005
Done! I changed your name to Yamcha.
Join - Old Dave - 10-28-2005
Your Roster page is updated, your training pass is qwerty, change it as soon as you can.
Join - Android-18 - 10-29-2005
You just type in a new one and click the 'train' button.