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Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alura - 08-04-2004
Last person was Piccolo
I give you a 6. I've seen better, but your improving and I like the character development
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alura - 08-04-2004
8, pretty much the same as you told me, except you could use longer roleplays usually. I can understand some short roleplays but you've been slacking on the length lately
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Old Dave - 08-04-2004
^yeah an 8 is good for you...you can really roleplay when your in the mood to do so.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alura - 08-04-2004
8.5, better then when Freiza was Zarbon.
I cant rate you higher till I see you in different situations
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Tami - 08-04-2004
6.5, from what I've seen. I haven't had time to look at past rps which I've heard were good
The latest I've seen are too short to be that good
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Kaden - 08-04-2004
With a 3 being proper punctuation, spelling, and cohesiveness, I would give teh brit a 6.
Oh the scale that the rest of you seem to be using, that would be somewhere around 8.25-ish.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alura - 08-04-2004
I've already rated Pic, so I wont.
I'm just posting to say stop rating the same people twice, when you've rated them, they dont need the same opinion again, they want more.
Next person rate Pic, not me
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Sage - 08-04-2004
I'll give Piccolo a 6. Your stuff is interesting, and your Piccolo isn't a carbon-copy of the one from DBZ, which is good.
EDIT: You could boost your rating easily with more substance/length.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alura - 08-04-2004
9.
I can honestly say your the only person I have read EVERY post you have ever done.
Freakin amazing shit, Bra. Especcially cause you use Burter good too 8)
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Kaden - 08-04-2004
Someone else rate mine, I had already asked brit to rate me in that other thread.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alura - 08-04-2004
Quote:Burter gets a solid 8.3, cause they are good, not great, but good.
8.3 is great.
What you were saying, is I should have gotten a 5 or 6.
Rad...9. Excellent stuff, only suggestions are more details and you'll go up to perfect 10
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Sage - 08-04-2004
BWAHAHAHA!!!
You get an 8.5. Mainly because you've given so much depth to your character. And you wrote the entire storyline for FoF, which was very engaging. Plus, Burter chills with Bra, and that makes him cool.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Rem-13 - 08-04-2004
EDITED
Wrong person
8 for teh freeze, everything that needs to be said has been said about him.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Abel - 08-04-2004
7.5 Good Description and length. I enjoy reading your posts.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alura - 08-05-2004
Pikkon, your supposed to rate the person above, thus you needed to rate Tapion.
Anyway, Pikkon, you've improved ALOT but your still not as good as I'd like to see. Thus, I'll give you a 4 for bad grammer and depth, BUT you are getting alot better
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - James - 08-05-2004
Ehm... I gib u a gooood 6. Mostly because of the writing's main focus as well as not relating characters to their race, like describing them more such as someone like... Guldo here, you can say something like "Little green runt" or "Trio eyed", someone can use those and relate to him. But all's good from what I see besides that.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - James - 08-05-2004
Quote:Originally posted by Nail
It won't let me edit
Wouldn't let me ether ><
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Alexander Trafford - 08-05-2004
Hmm Pikkon, I'm gonna give u a 6-ish, There is a grammer problem.. But from when you started to where u are now.. very good improvement.. Keep up the good work green man
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Rem-13 - 08-05-2004
Id give j00 a 7.5ish My suggestion would be to RP you enviroment more, give your reader a better sense of were they and your character is. I need to take my own advice as well.
Rate the Person Above's Roleplays - Rem-13 - 08-05-2004
6ish... maybe 6.5
You have improved since we worked "in Indina Who?" a while back. My suggestion would be... as always... give more details, specifically your enviroment. Make me feel as if Im there.