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Join - Hellfighter 17 - 11-09-2005 You need to post your three starting moves and that sample RP needs some work. We try to use past tense, not present, try some pronouns for Chiatzou and Gohan, such as "human" and "saiya-jin," or "painted warrior" and "muscular fighter." Also, you need a lot more description that that; that could be stretched to become probably twenty times that length at a minimum easily, so I'm asure you can turn that into at least 300 words. Okay? |