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Joining as Turlis - Old Dave - 02-17-2006
No you cannot be Omega Shenron no Eternal Dragons or Kai's or custom characters just for reference.
Your rp sample needs alittle work, it just does not flow when you read it, your sentence structure needs work, you have periods in places where you should have a comma. I think you understand about writing with description but grammer needs work. Also your rp sample needs to be at least 300 words, strive for more.
Please submit another application or redo this one and I'll read it over again.