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Joining - Krillin - 04-23-2006

It's obvious you have talent, but you need to realize that we write in the past tense here. Instead of:

"As the sun rises in the morning sky, Bardock is seen walking down a little dirt path in the middle of the woods,"

We would write it as this:

"As the sun rose in the morning sky, Bardock walked down a little dirt path in the middle of the woods,"

Sorta like book style. If you could just pop up a short little paragraph showing that you've got this covered, we'll patch you through.


Joining - Burter Jr - 04-23-2006

That's fine. Register


Joining - Hellfighter 17 - 04-24-2006

I guess so. Your training password will be 'qwerty,' change it ASAP. Also, atomic blast is not acceptable as it is.