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Sign-up app. - Android-18 - 05-12-2006
Your RP could use work, I suggest you use Microsoft word to help with some of your errors. Also try to put a space between a new paragraph, so instead of:
Quote:"Chio...."whispered the challenging namek, tears forming in his eyes, he turned his head to Slug, eyes a blaze, "You will pay for what you've done to him!"
"Hmhmhm, Show me what you got kid!"Lord Slug challenged,
"I am no kid fighter, I am Celio, the greatest fighter in this village."Lord Slug smirked a replie to Celio's statement,
"No for long..."
Do it like this:
Quote:"Chio...."whispered the challenging namek, tears forming in his eyes, he turned his head to Slug, eyes a blaze, "You will pay for what you've done to him!"
"Hmhmhm, Show me what you got kid!"Lord Slug challenged,
"I am no kid fighter, I am Celio, the greatest fighter in this village."Lord Slug smirked a replie to Celio's statement,
"No for long..."
Go ahead and register as Lord Slug, your training pass for the roster will be qwerty, change it as soon as possible. I'm hping you'll improve
, most do.You'll also need to give 1 move, you get regeneration automatically.