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Join - Hellfighter 17 - 08-29-2006
You can use brackets here, but you used them in the asterick action sense, but if you used 'threw' instead of 'throw,' it would have become past tense and worked. There are other instances of non-past tense, but just remember to look out for that. Also, you do not say who said something with "-Cell Junior," but instead do it how you did it the rest of the roleplay. There was just the odd bad part, so you can register. Someone will activate you. Your training password will be 'qwerty,' please change it ASAP. Oh, and you'll need a third starting move.
Join - Hellfighter 17 - 08-29-2006
No, it's still 'qwerty.' Your account has been activated.
Join - Hellfighter 17 - 08-30-2006
Yessir.