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new rp - Krillin - 09-19-2006
Apologies for that. Sometimes we miss things. =/
Your main priority at this point should be to fix up the grammar. There are quite a few misspellings through here, such as "gitting" instead of "getting", and "giagantic" instead of "gigantic". Typing up your posts in Microsoft Word beforehand would help you out in this respect.
Also, grammatically, there were quite a few problems. Some examples are ""The clone called its self Babe" instead of "The clone called itself Babe" and "Noku never seen Babe since that day" instead of "Noku had not seen Babe since that day."
I very much recommend reading Bardock's Roleplaying Guide, found here: http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/thread.php?threadid=9357&sid=
It might seem a little lengthy, but it will be very helpful.
Once you read through that, make another roleplay post and we'll move on from there. =)