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Wtf? - Ruhiel - 10-23-2006
What grade are you in at the moment?
Wtf? - Warako - 10-23-2006
Going by his age, I'd say 12th grade?
Wtf? - Hellfighter 17 - 10-23-2006
Your teacher's nice.
Wtf? - Ruhiel - 10-23-2006
Depends on your class level. If it's an AP English class, yeah, that sucker is a C, or maybe even a D (and in some cases, that's a U/F, I'm afraid). Sorry, but that's how it goes in those classes. I know, I'm in one, and my teacher enjoys giving me them. 'Course, that's for poetry writing and analysis, and I personally hate poetry with a burning passion (I find it pointless and stupid), so that causes some problems.
However, if it's not an AP course, that really shouldn't be a C paper. If it was your final draft, then yeah, it could merit a C. It's got some errors, and doesn't have much coherency. However, if it's a first or revised draft, then no, that's not fair at all. That should be at least a B, minimum, for a first draft. However, if it was a final... yeah, I'd have to agree. Especially in junior year.
Sorry if that wasn't the answer you wanted to hear.
But that's just how our lovely educational system works.
Wtf? - Kirano - 10-23-2006
Badly structured.
Wtf? - Hellfighter 17 - 10-23-2006
Well, free-range mainly means like what point of view, characters, setting, storyline, that kinda stuff, but as far as writing quality, I doubt she'd not care about that.
Wtf? - Ruhiel - 10-23-2006
Quote:Originally posted by TAFKA Olibu
I'm in comp >< So yea, I guess I should'a put more effort into it. And no, thats my rough draft I had on my computer. I just find it irritating when she gives us free range but actually has things she's looking for ><
Literature or Language AP? If it's Literature, I envy you. I'd love to write anything prose or short story related. I haven't gotten to do any creative writing inside school since... lemme think... 7th grade. Yep. My class makes me wish Shakespeare had died young. Which makes me mad, because I used to like Shakespeare. >.<
But yeah, for an AP class, you probably should have put some more into it. Free-range, yeah, the idea you had was original. However, the whole story looked like you rushed it, perhaps. Or, if you're like me, did it in the 5 minutes before class. =P