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Android 13 - Celipa - 12-18-2006
Explain your third move, please. Also, your sample needs to be 300 words. Try and write it in Microsoft Word, so it corrects your mistakes. Also, look around on the site to see how RPs are done here. Spaced out between paragraphs and such.
Try the RP sample again and explain your third move, and I'll check back on it. Don't worry, no long wait this time. =P
Android 13 - Celipa - 12-20-2006
Quote:Originally posted by Guest
I'll just extend this a little to 300.
Android 13 stared off a tall cliff and looked at the city below. He processed everyone's power level and nothing appeared above his. He flew down torwards the city. People were screaming as they watched him fly torwards the Mayor's office. Once he arrived, he charged a large Death Blast, and shot the middle of the building. The building collapsed and the pieces crumbled and destroyed a few other small buildings, people were now yelling at the top of their lungs.
A smirk came across Android 13's face as he started to shoot his Machine-Gun blasts at the city. Smoke was all around the air, Android 13's night vision sight was activated so he could see. He scanned the city, no power levels were left except one, the city's power generator.
He flew down torwards the generator and sucked the energy into his system. In minutes, he had drained the whole tank. The city was now worthless , he flew into the sky. He began charging a very violent Death Blast. Once he was done charging, he shot it at the city. With the energy he had stolen from the generator, the death blast disentegrated anything and everything it touched.
Android 13 had destroyed the small city, but he still had a hole in him, he had a craving for destruction, death, and violence. This small city could not, and would not satisfy him. He decided to go to another city, ALL the cities to fill the hole. He flew to the next city, but a power level flew torwards him. He looked to the right, it was too late. A rocket hit him. The power level was a rocket missile that had been fired at him. Once it hit him, he went flying backwards. Something was wrong, he fell to the ground. The missle flew overhead. The missle hit his fighting chip. His fighting mecahnisems were deactivated.
Suddenly, Dr. Gero came up.
"Need some help 13?" he asked while grinning.
Android 13 groaned. "No. I don't need your help!" He said angrily.
Suddenly, his fighting chip kicked back into gear. He slowly stood up. His eyes glared red.
He smirked and flew, muttering, "Sorry, Doctor, but..." and then he took to the sky.
He flew off torwards his next destination..
Ok, work on your grammar once you're in, and I'd say you're fine. Just make sure you do these posts on Microsoft Word if you have it. See how I spaced your RP entry? Do that when you post. ^_^
I'll change your name, and create your roster.