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Monster Carrot - Banned Monster Carrot - 12-26-2006

Note to staff: Just reminding you I previously tried to join as Dodoria. I changed my mind and now and I would like to be monster carrot. If im approved please change my name to monster carrot.
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INFO

Character- Monster carrot
Personality-tricky, clever.
Planet- Earth
Email- FOJC224@yahoo.com
messenger- FOJC224
starting move one- 360 degree spin kick
starting move two- super punch
starting move three- carrot blast, the user makes artificial carrot bombs out of ki and launches them at enemy.
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ROLEPLAY

Monster carrot gazed at a portrait as he sipped on a cup of tea. The Mona Lisa really was an exellent painting. The steam from the tea was beginning to condensate on the furry rabit's whiskers, causing dew drops to form.

MC began to nibble on a carrot. The juices from the vegatable swirled around in the rabbit's mouth. There was something so relaxing about a warm, summer day.
Suddenly MC's phone began to ring.

"What's up doc?"

"Its me Jason."

Jason organized all of monster carrots crimes. He was MC's greatest companion,but whenever he called it was not for socializing.

"Well?" monster carrot started "what do you need?"

"Money."

"MONEY! you disturbed my perfect day for some money?"

"Yes sir, im sorry."

"Don't be, I'll get you your money if you get me my favorite food in return."

"Yes sir." Jason shouted.

MC slowly got up from his tea table. He could already taste the lushious carrots. The tricky little rabbit pressed a red button on the wall near the mona lisa replica. The portrait dropped to the floor revealing a chamber. MC cllimbed up into the chamber. A single gun was on the wall. He took the gun down an examined it. The weapon was a hand gun with deadly accuracy.

After retrieving his weapon from the vault, he left his mansion and hopped on his motor bike. He began to travel the country side of south west Japan. MC rode along a country side in search of another person. After a couple hours a man riding a hover car passed monster carrot on the lonely country rode.

MC pulled of a U-turn and began to follow the man. The rabbit pressed a couple buttons on his motor bike . Seconds later a net shot out of the bike trapping the man in the hover car. MC parked his bike and walked up to the trapped car. The man tangled in the net for a while until he was free. Then he started running at monster carrot.

The rabbit jumped in the air and performed a 360 degree spin kick. MC foot hit the man right on his cheek, knocking the civillian down too the floor.

"Sir."MC asked in a polite voice "Do you have a wallet with you!"

"Son of a bi.." before the man could finish his sentence monster carrot shot him right in between the eye's.

MC began to search the man's pockets for money, making sure he avoided the puddles of blood streaming out of the man. All in all MC earned/stole around 600 zenie.

He hopped back on his bike and began to ride towards Jason's headquarters. Once he arrived jason greeted him. They made a traded, 600 zenie for 300 french carrots. That night MC had a fantastic carrot stew. He was finnaly back in paradise.

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Note: MC=Monster Carrot =)


Monster Carrot - Hellfighter 17 - 12-27-2006

You should try using alternatives for "MC," since you use it a lot, such as "Mosnter Carrot," "the large rabbit," "bunny," et cetera. However, it was still good enough. i shall activate you and change your name. Your trainign password will be "qwerty": Change it as soon as possible.

Also, you'll need different moves than those. =\