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The Fallen Soldier. Non-DBZ- Short story - Hellfighter 17 - 02-09-2005 Wow, I really liked that. Pan said what I was going to say. It is very well-written all over...? The Fallen Soldier. Non-DBZ- Short story - Sage - 02-09-2005 I read it, I just didn't have anything particularly relevant to say. It's good. I just have one qaulm. "Bdu" should be "BDU", since it stands for Battle Dress Uniform. And usually acronyms are in all caps. =\ Other than that, ...yeah. The Fallen Soldier. Non-DBZ- Short story - Sage - 04-24-2005 Quote:Originally posted by Lunch Mmm, revived a dead thread, you did. Hurt you for this, people might. (Don't revive dead threads, j0) |