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My Namekian Quest - Banned Dana - 03-01-2005
Well, I finally finished my Namek Quest: Weather Patterns.
I think that it was good, I really liked the ending. I made it slightly different than the actual storyline.
The storyline that I believe it was supposed to be about was just relocating a village from a disasterous location, full of really bad weather.
My storyline was a little more in depth. I made it so that an evil Namek and Sayajin could control weather and after they attacked a village, they left a case of very bad weather to cover up their tracks.
In the story I used a fake character: Lari, leader of the lost village.
I also used two NPC characters: Placo and Charango. They used their actually attributes though and they weren't a really big part of the story.
I would just like to know what you guys thought of it.
Thanks!
My Namekian Quest - Alura - 03-01-2005
I'm gonna let Kami grade it, simply because I know he's a big fan of people using quests as storylines, and he's probably the most generous when it comes to grading quests.
With that said, excellent job