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Zykaage (custom) - Zykaage - 12-11-2007
Name: Zykaage (Ze-ka-geh)
Race: Saiyan
Starting Planet: Earth
Fighting Style: Zykaage is not very powerful, but his speed and tactics add up to a highly dangerous outbreak of intelligent moves, proving fatal to any opponent that he may come in contact with.
Short Bio: He was born to a poor family, that loved him much, until they found out the painful truth that he wasn’t exactly human, and had power beyond his control, and accidentally murdered his parents. He was forced to pay back his debt to the Earth by helping rid all evil on the face of the planet, but first he would need to learn to control his powers.
General Description: Zykaage is tall for his current age, thirteen, but is still short compared to what his parents were. His skin is a light tan color and his muscular body is a result of ages of training under the hot summer sun. His hair is a deep black color, just like his eyes.
Starting Moves:
Kamehameha
Unknown Power 1 – This power doesn’t do anything much just makes his hair turn purple whenever he thinks of his parents’ death. (Little does Zykaage know, but this power has to be activated to perform Unkown Power 2).
Unknown Power 2 –This terrible power was used to murder his parents, but even after many years of practice, he cannot perform, by free will.
Role-play Sample:
Shortly before his parents’ death, Zykaage was a happy, spoiled boy, not understanding the immense power that will soon be bestowed onto him. His father was a famous author, that wrote many books about an imaginary race, which he named the Kaage’s after his son’s name, Zykaage. His mother was just a harmless cook, a completely normal mother that shouted at his dad for giving Zykaage odd thoughts about himself being a glorious Kaage. Self-evidently, his mother nor mother knew that their harmless boy truly wasn’t the innocent boy they thought he was. In that matter of fact, Zykaage didn’t know that he himself wasn’t an innocent boy that could completely stop any evil from their evil deeds, or turn evil, and create chaos in the world, as they knew it.
September 25th, Zykaage’s birthday, but also, a sad mournful day of his parents’ death day. Zykaage woke up early in the morning, to wake up his father and mother to declare that it was officially his birthday, and that he will finally be 13 years old! But quite desolately, he would not wake up his parents that morning. He went to the kitchen before waking them up to get something warm to drink. Later on, he planned to get out of the house and explore the forest that is about a half a mile from his house. While he just exited the city, his first sight of schizophrenia happened. He didn’t understand what was truly happening, but he greeted the unknown figure.
“Good-morning to you kind stranger. Who may you be?” The figure did not answer at all; he just kept on walking toward Zykaage, who at the time was starting to be scared of the odd figure. “I would like you too keep away from me please,” Zykaage commanded. The imaginary figure just kept on walking slowly toward the innocent boy, which is where the start of Zykaage’s powers were unleashed.
“Get away!” screamed Zykaage at the top of his lungs, and unexpectedly, as he stuck his arm out to stop the figure from getting closer, a purple beam of light was emitted from his hand. The blow was devastating; the trees behind the figure and everything around him were completely obliterated. But the figure was still there, unharmed. Now Zykaage was really scared, everything in his life had changed in one day, from waking up and becoming thirteen, to schizophrenia, to a purple beam emitting from his hand. The little boy couldn’t handle it much, he just ran away, to his home, to the shelter of his parents, which he wouldn’t have for long.
Zykaage ran like never before, but the figure ran faster, and before he could notice, the figure disappeared while Zykaage had neared his home.
“Mama!” screamed Zykaage as loud as he can, because he was very panicked at the moment.
“Yes?” his mom calmly awnsered.
“There was a man chasing me, and a purple light…” The mysterious figure had appeared in-between him and his parents. “Don’t you see it, he’s right there?”
His reaction was to stick his hand out and grab the figure, but it was too late when he noticed what happened. The purple light had emitted from his hand again, murdering his parents. But the power of the blast was so great, that it even cured his schizophrenic mind. Zykaage, had been devastated.
Zykaage (custom) - Zykaage - 12-12-2007
Strength: 150
Defense: 150 + 50 = 200
Speed: 150 + 100 = 250
Stamina: 150
Recovery: 150 + 100 = 250
Attack Power: 150 + 100= 250
Intelligence: 150 + 50 = 200
Luck: 150
Determination: 150 + 50 = 200
Sorry, I didn't notice I had to add that in.
Zykaage (custom) - Bardock - 12-12-2007
Sorry, I accidentally deleted your account. Re-register.
Your role-play is fine, but I would pick two different moves. The only techniques we have that allow physical changes are power ups. It is also be easier if they had actual names. You can role-play him as not knowing their names until he masters them if you'd like.
Register a new account and fix those and we can get squared away.
Lastly, just a nitpick about your bio. If he was born to poor human parents, how is he a saiyan?
Zykaage (custom) - Zykaage - 12-13-2007
ok, so i guess i forgot to mention his hereditary system. He is an 'unkown' sayin. Its not exactly his race, but something in his birth changed him into a sayin type creature.
And here are the new attacks.
(Zykaage doesn't know the names of the last two till later)
Kamehameha
Cs*10 (* means multiplication) - This terrible power was used to murder his parents, but even after many years of practice, he cannot perform, by free will. It creates a purple light that emits from Zykaage's hand(s)
Fr*10 (* means multiplication) - This is the same thing as Cs*10 except the beam is blue and is by far more powerful. Zykaage can't use this untill he has perfected Cs*10.
Zykaage (custom) - Bardock - 12-13-2007
Either he's exactly saiyan or not. If he's "saiyan-like" that would make him a different race, and therefore a non-transformer, thereby giving him a different set of power ups. It's not a question of biography, it's a question of, which race is he "exactly" so we can determine your power ups.
I figured you were thinking more along the lines of, he was born a saiyan, came to Earth, and was adopted by human parents, or was unknowningly switched at birth, or something like that. He doesn't have to be pure-blooded. He can be half saiyan or whatever.
Whatever your idea in your bio is fine, but he's either a saiyan or a non-transformer; he can't be "saiyan-like." So I'll go ahead and green-light you, but you tell me whether he's saiyan or not.
Zykaage (custom) - Hysterio - 01-28-2008
i need help joining. i already registered for dis thing
Zykaage (custom) - Bardock - 01-29-2008
1.) You should probably read the stickies in the forum, or at least follow the example of others.
2.) Create your own joining thread and fill out a join form. You'll find it in one of the aforementioned stickies.