Viewers' Choice Winner Wrote:It was impossible for the namekian to fathom that Tapion could have, so carelessly, signed his own Warrant of Death. The mercenary could do nothing more then look back down upon his old comrad, or perhaps newest victim.

"Perhaps in the Abyss the impossible is very well possible', muttered the grim feind. "But why, Tapion? Why this? What drove you to do this? Was it me? The Abyss? Did you have this all planned since we had met earlier? Or was it a spur of the moment?"

Retane sighed and leapt down from the clift, landing in a kneeled fashion as he looked down at the peaceful Horsemen. That what Tapion was, though, through and through. A true Horsemen saw oppurtunity and took what they desired. And Tapion had desired to make it to the top, and Retane was one obstical that had stood in his way. But with failure of a great risk, comes great sacrafice. A life for a life. Retane had just returned the favor to a freind in the end.

But now it was time for punishment.

CONGRATULATIONS, RETANE!

Author's Commentary: Retane has shown that he has not only grown as a writer over the past year, but most definitely as an artist as well. He has begun to shape Retane's personality from the two-dimensional mercenary to someone who is not just in it for the kill, but rather the experience. He proved himself a skilled writer in that he dodged certain demise several times -- in the face of a fusion, he escaped. In the face of betrayal, he escaped. In the face of a giant, dumb man, he escaped. Retane's character development thoughout his short time in the saga has given us reason to mourn his elimination. He was a strong competitor, and though we all are deep down relieved at not having to fight him for the title, we are sad to see him go. His writing skill reflected each day, and each day he continued to show his luck and determination. But in the end, the fourth time was the charm for Retane's would-be assailants, and now, we have to watch him leave. We've asked Burter, our host, to give us a short, one-sentence statement on his feelings for this week's Viewer's Choice winner.

Burter's Comments On Retane: "A good writer but a horrible gamer."

Zangya Wrote:First PC competitor. GAH. =(

EDIT: Also, contestant who is aware of the pregnancy. If you say she was aware, I'm-a come after you. D=<

Android 17 Wrote:She was 9 months pregnant, and broke her water after the Rad-17-Buu fight.

lol

Bardock Wrote:That was actually well-written. Nice plug, by the way.