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Do I suck? - Hellfighter 17 - 05-11-2005
I wouldn't necassarily say that you "suck," but you have not improved much since DA, if at all. I do not mean to sound harsh, but there is practically no description. You basically just say what is happening and then add a little humour in. The humour, I must admit, allowed me to become more interested in it, but it just comes down to description where you are majorly lacking. Some poeple do not go for description very much, they more so go for thoughts or feelings, and you barely have any of the former, let alone the latter. Especially the beginning. I very much so dislike to read something happen at the beginning, especially of a whole situation, but that may just be me. I like things to develop; form a little description of the world or the circumstance before the character is actually introduced into it.
If you want me to give an example, then I will, I just don't feel like it at the time.
Yea, recoome probably will give you some hints, he isn't RPing.
Do I suck? - Abel - 05-11-2005
It's funny how you all mention Recoome. I'm not saying he's bad...it's just that he asked once when he was way worse than now and I told him what he should do and now he rocks and surpassed me but then again, I really suck. o_o