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to a dying lover - Vegeta - 06-14-2005
I can't remember the faces I saw. But I can remember their voices piercing my darkness. "Wake up." They called. But I would not return. I remained there, in that forest of lights. Reds and yellows swirled past. Birds chasing some far off dream. I caught a feather as we passed a streetlight. I sewed my own dreams onto the feather and return it to the wind. It would not reach the ocean.
A brick falls from a rooftop, the earth shakes as life crumbles. It was in this night we crossed paths. I remember your name but always chose to forget it. You offered me a drink and I carefully sipped. As you taunted from this side of the ice.
We slipped down the wall and kissed the hardwood. It was a crystal clear reflection: Our lives. I wiped the dirt and decay with your solvent tears.
The mail arrived and I recieved your invitation. Addressed: To my love. We joined together in vacuous love. It was each other we needed not. I bought you a ring and you bought me a jacket. We watched them play.
We kissed and found nothing in each other. I filled you with my dying breath. You filled me with your cigarette smoke. I took back my ring and you took back your jacket. Your eyes still empty.
Pealed up concrete and made a home, within a cold dark heart. Here I waited for your warm touch. I waited for your call, "Wake up.". But I would not return.
to a dying lover - Old Dave - 06-14-2005
;( Jesus Christ Koola....I'm speechless.
to a dying lover - Tamsin - 06-14-2005
Well done, Koola, well done. Its very poetical.
to a dying lover - Vegeta - 06-14-2005
hey. thank you guys.
to a dying lover - Hellfighter 17 - 06-14-2005
It displayed the meaning very will I find. Nicely done, Kuura.
to a dying lover - Ruhiel - 06-15-2005
That was really profound... and sad. Nice job.
to a dying lover - James - 06-15-2005
Thank you for that, Koola. Best piece I've read in a long while.
to a dying lover - Dr. Cringle - 06-15-2005
Aww thats sweet.
to a dying lover - Vegeta - 06-16-2005
yeah thanks
to a dying lover - Kami - 06-16-2005
I give up. You win.
*drinks*